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Uzumaki Tenten
2007-09-21 . chapter 7
wow, that was good. plz write the epilogue. I want to know how it turned out
Sharidaken Tranqity
2007-08-02 . chapter 7
Wow! That was a wonderful ending. If only it could last a bit longer, but still all three off them kissing. Wow! Can't wait for the epilogue. Good Story Asia. Very nice work.
Sharidaken Tranqity
2007-07-26 . chapter 6
Great chapter my friend. I really like what you've done with Rock Lee and Naruto. Also for your final chapter of your story how about this.

We have three romance scenes with Rei/Sasuke, Moe/Sakura, and Naruto/Ten Ten. Like Both Naruto & Sasuke confuse their feelings to the girls their dating and for Moe & Sakura well, just have there romance be what ever you want it to be. But you should have all three of the couples kiss at the end.

And I have your message, but I've been so busy that I haven't had time to try working on DA. So I'll let you know sooner or later. Also thanks for reading my story too. I can't wait for more people to think of my misc couple.
Hagensen
2007-07-26 . chapter 6
I really like the Rei character I hope she and Sasuke get together. Rock out!
Sharidaken Tranqity
2007-01-31 . chapter 5
Good, good. I love it. I even love your character Rei. She's perfect for American Idol. As a matter in fact, I would like to use all your characters in American Idol if that's okay with you. And thanks for reading my story. When I finish up my other story I'll celebrate by reading a lot of your fan fics and everyone else's I know. It will be my treat. By the way, I love that part what Moe said to Sasuke when he said it sounded like sauce gay. That was funny. Well I really enjoy the chapter. But until I finish up my parody I'll continue on more of it. Well hope you up date soon.
Sharidaken Tranqity
2007-01-31 . chapter 4
I love it, I love it, I love it...! Alsom you put Moe in their. Thanks. By the way if you want to have people know what Moe looks like tell them to look him up on my profile. Also I was thinking of helping you out with your story with this chapter if you couldn't think of one. Well let me know if you need any help. I'm willing to do anything. Well good chapter. On to the nexted.
Mizu Hime
2007-01-30 . chapter 5
grEAT CHAPPIE. Update soon
Mizu Hime
2007-01-28 . chapter 4
Great chappie and you finally updated. Update soon
messenger of darkness
2007-01-24 . chapter 3
good
unlovedepacifist
2007-01-23 . chapter 3
wow
NarutoGeninOfTheWind
2007-01-23 . chapter 3
2 Words... Just Glorious xD (if i spelled Glorius wrong im sorry of if i spelled it wrong... NVM u know what i mean)
Sharidaken Tranqity
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
I agree my friend. After all it was a guy so it should be a first kiss from a girl instead. But I like the chapter so far. But maybe instead of Sakura with Neji how about Ino instead. If your fine with that. Cause if you wanted to put my OC in your story I would had him with Sakura since in American Idol and my fan fics she has a crush on him thou. But if not then how about another Sakura that his age and with pink hair and green eyes. Also this one has brust. Since Sakura doesn't have any. Also this Sakura was suppose to be Sakura all grown up but for your story have her personality be different from the orignal one. This is only if you have Sakura with Neji. But good chapter still... keep up the good work.
ni-you-wo-de-xin
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
lol. I love that. "hope I didn't kill him..."
Mizu Hime
2007-01-14 . chapter 3
great story so far, update
Sharidaken Tranqity
2007-01-14 . chapter 2
Ahh... thats cuite. You know if your OC really liked Sasuke, I would pair her up with him in my story American Idol if you want. Also I'm gonna have all the authors who sign up for the next chapter appear when ever I posted up another. That way it'll be much eaiser for me to do.

And by the way, I couldn't help but get this out of my thoughts. This might be perfect for your story.

Tenten & Naruto go on a mission, and some how Naruto took Tenten in the forest for a short cute and then they get lost. Only after that Naruto and Tenten have a moment with one another like they talk to one other not looking face to face but back to back sitting on a rock. They tell them about their feelings and before Naruto starts to head off going is seperate way to find a way out of the force Tenten appears behind him and puts her hands on his face slowly kissing him in the lips before Naruto left.

So how does that sound. Pretty good. Well let me know. And good chapter. Another thing, can you do me a favor and read two of my stories Fan Fiction 1 @ 2 the Battle for Earth. But for 2 review it at chapter 6 for me will ya. Cause I have two more chapters coming between chapter 6 & 7. So please do that for me. Well I wish you luck my your wonderful fic. Hope you like the idea.
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