Abstract, but highly entertaining! I enjoyed it quite a bit!

"in case of a not-so-urgent emergency. Or in case of leisure."

-_-; Hopeless. That's why we love him, though, isn't it? XD

Well, that's it! All chapters reviewed! Here's to you!

Great story, the "know your stars" idea was a very nice one... keep the good work coming, mah friend!

“What was that?” The Stranger asked, now partially finished prying the grate loose.

“I don’t know,” Catherine responded. “It sounded like ‘Please, no, not again, no.’ Do you think that Saavedro’s in pain?”

“Probably,” the Stranger said(...)"

lol

I will never be able to list all those lines I just can't get out of my head since they made me laugh so much!

Like "Water torture! -Blades. -Water torture! -Blades...", or "Hey, maybe I *do* want you to use your head..."

No, seriously, I can re-read that stuff a thousand times, it still makes me laugh! bravo, Lemony!...

“Okay, that’s about the most retarded thing I’ve ever seen!”

“But you’ve seen it.”

BWAHAHA *busted*! XD (our favorite Narayani is even more lovable when he is getting mad! yeah- from a good distance, I mean.)

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omg the end was so scary though! Creeped me out. *is out with hammer to chase the "voice".* *Then freaks out an runs away to hide*

I was wondering, though... how comes Tamra doesn't notice the shredded robes, in the end?... Bah, nevermind. He'll tell her he met an angry cat ;)

(it must have been really cool, playing Cassandra! o_o)

NOT A REVIEW! X)

Wow, this was probably my favorite chapter. Maybe a bit short, and also off topic, though... mmh... *thinks. (I swear... )*

lol Well, that's one more review to your count, and you deserve it! So no complaining. :p

chocolate! c-h-o-c-o-l-a-t-e! CHOCOLATE! *goes frantic* I love chocolate! Why do I have to also be freaking allergic to it? :( That-is-unfair!

Oh, and also... tell Saavedro that if he tries to steal my chocolate, I no longer respond of my actions.

He he! granpy's scared of his little grandson? mwahaha yes, he can be scary, I admit...

And I would really love to see Cho and Saavy playing rock, paper, scissors... XD

“Well, fine! Then I love that story!”

“I love it more.”

“I love it the most, you big stupid poopy-head.”

“I love it to infinity!”

“I love it to double infinity!”

“I love it to the next Age and back again!”

“I love it more than that!”

“I love it to twenty-five!”

“I love it even more than all of that!”

And maybe even a little more.

No, seriously, this is great! I love the way you mix humor with suspense, and also having all those Myst people back together _

BWAHAHAHA - doom, Saavy, doom.

lol This poor guy's destiny is to follow those two nutters around and then get stuck! doom...

*chokes on the floor with laughter*

“Atrus… likes to butter his arms and run around screaming ‘I’m a muffin, I’m a muffin!’”

You know, all along those chapters, you nearly killed me with each "know your stars" session. I was laughing my sandals off, all alone in front of my computer, looking very stupid, and eveyone kept asking "what?..." "What's up?..." "Bah, nevermind her..."

Now, you know Dreemun, the stupid-looking fic reader who laughs her sandals off.

-Wha? No, I don't- (etc etc etc)

I also love the way S&A constantly bicker... X)

lol I just love chicken Atrus:

“No!” Atrus yelled suddenly.

Both females looked at him with a suspicious glance.

“Uh, I mean, no!” he said sheepishly. “I mean… shouldn’t we send you in, my friend?”

lmao I can so much picture that... XD

Also, back home, when reading for the first time, I remember I that when reading the Saavedro part, I was thinking "now, now... why do I have a bad feeling about this?..." lole

Oh, and I love your Sirrus and your Achenar, too! They're funny and creepy, just perfect!

Right!

So I uploaded last time, I read at home, and this all was just supah-kewl, and now I'm back for the reviews!

I'll try to take all chapters in the right order...

Ch.1...

He he he, havoc ahead XD I love how allMyst people seem to have a problem with remembering to take a linking book with them for the way back!

Oh, and I can't help but see the stranger girl from your comics all along... I like this, it is like another, longer comic! ;)

On to chapter 2...

squeehee! great ending... ah yes, must beware of the good ol' continuity!

i loved the paragraph about pink skies, too.

Yay! I liked this chapter! I hope to see more great fanfics from you!

'Tis Random Little Writer, too lazy to log in. Anyway, I loved this chapter, as usual. I'm going to be sad that this fic will be over, but I'll be looking forward to other fics written by you!

-Random

E, a new part! I love your sense of humour in this fic, it's a really enjoyable read even though I've never actually seen the show in question... The idea of Stranger and Atrus playing Jenga cracked me up. *chewing on fingernails* Poor Saavedro...