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Lizzie 7/14/10 . chapter 1
Gah! What a punishment! Poor Lizzie; having to make out with Barbossa.
Always Running The Labyrinth 1/31/10 . chapter 1
FTW XD

That's all I have to say. FTW!
HoistTheColours 8/3/08 . chapter 1
Ahaha. Wow, I totally loved this.

I would normally argue over the fact that Will would never even THINK of such an evil idea, nor let it happen...BUT, you actually made it work, so I won't comment on that. Like, everyone was in-character to that certain extent, that it doesn't even matter that their (meaning Will's,) morals were slightly askew.

I hope that makes a least SOME sense, what I wrote up there, lOl.

Anyways, I found this very entertaining, & I loved how the end was unexpected.

OH! & I totally loved how you write Barbossa!

AWESOME[:

Sincerely,

HoistTheColours
Asher Elric 7/8/08 . chapter 1
No, Captain Barbossa, all you get is the kiss. Hahah!

Love it! once again, Nytd sent me. She said you'r was a nice read and I might say that the two that I've read are well written and I think I may be able to learn something from you.

Thank you.

Dizzy
Nytd 5/9/08 . chapter 1
This was very cute and fun.

If I were Elizabeth I'd just throw caution to the wind and myself to all three pirates. ;)
Dyien 11/16/07 . chapter 1
OMG so HILARIOUS!

when i saw the summary and rating i suspected it might be the typical sex-based thing people sometimes right, i but i must say i found it hard to stop little outbursts of laughter for the next 15 mins after I'd read this!

:D:D:D:D

totally lol!
LibFeathers 10/15/07 . chapter 1
Well, Team Barbossa from the IMDB has lured me to this site. I've never ventured forth into the waters of fanfiction before. I've begun working my way through some of these stories. I wanted to say, ShinyGreenApple, that you do have some skill as a writer. I'm looking forward to reading you other stories.
HaveATropicanaMorning 9/13/07 . chapter 1
Hahha awesome story
Cmdr's Monkey 8/23/07 . chapter 1
Haha... But shouldn't Barbossa be afraid now? That girl has the Kiss of Death! Or maybe because he's died already he's immune to that curse? *snickers*
Valkyrie-chick 7/25/07 . chapter 1
I love It! Keep that one going for sure!
Berende 6/30/07 . chapter 1
What can I say? Everything's been said... I'll just... giggle.

Lizzie was kissing around in the films but good old Hector got none of it. Guess it was his turn now. :D

Gah... I can imagine the blush on her face after Barbossa's last line... Muhaha...
Sanes 6/5/07 . chapter 1
Haha. I love it, you should definately carry this on. And Barbossabeth is the only way to go.
Morfiwien Greenleaf 6/1/07 . chapter 1
Hee...I bet Will wasn't too happy with the way Elizabeth was clinging to Barbossa! I would love to see the aftermath of this.
lexae 5/23/07 . chapter 1
do not end it now please ! i want to know what's gonna happen !
St-Jimmy1669 5/18/07 . chapter 1
I thought this was very well-written (and the grammar was impeccable, too). I, for one, can't think of any way that this could be improved upon - so well done.
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