oh, thats sad...
I do like it though! =)

I see nothing wrong with your punctuation. In fact, I think this is a very nicely written story, well done!

Trust flamers to flame anonimously! So brave :-)

This is just me (author) trying to reach "amnesty". English is not my first (or my second, for that matter) language, but since I am trying to learn, I would appreciate more especific tips. If you ever get to read this, let me know! Thanks.

You need to learn to use punctuation.

good
It could be continued.

Hey nice little ficlet ... very deep and well written great job =) ...I look forwards to reading more from u =D

Awesome

I liked very much!

Very sweet, in a strange way.

Absolutely breathtaking. I don't review often, but your story certainly warranted it.
I'd love it to be continiued.
Adding to alert.

Wow, that was so great... I love how you did it.. Maybe it was emotionally, but in the right way... I could understand both, Severus, who wanted to be so powerful and Hermione, who wanted to save them both..
Wished, you would write more to this :)