I like stories in which Padme survives

Since you no longer write ff how were you planning to end this story?

Love it and please update!

This is great you are an amazing writer. I have read almost all of your stories and this is just as great as they are. I hope that you put the new chapter up soon. I can't wait for the conversations that are going to happen between Padme and Maiia.

Me again! Just dropping by to say how awesome this fic truly is, and to bring your review count up to 130. You deserve it!

I think I died. God, update as quick as you can, you hear me? My heart was racing during this chapter, but you managed to provide another heart-wrenching couple of lines.

“Give us time, M-m-mummy,” he says softly." I love Luke!

Good.

ooh boy...maybe not a good time for reuniting family's =(

What a nice surprise to find an update to this fantastic story! I hope that Leia will chill out eventually, maybe curiousity of what her mom is like will make her give Padme a chance to get to know her. Luke had good advice, giving them time is best, since she was gone for five years. It seemed like Anakin turned into a different person for a minute when he talked about how she could have returned, but chose not to. You write their emotions so well, this is a great chapter. I hope that no matter how long it takes, you are able to someday finish this story. It is one of the best I have ever read, too good to go unfinished, and well worth the wait to read. Thank you for sharing your talent, and I am looking forward to what happens next!

wow, iabsolutely love this story, thank you for updating!!

I am so happy to see that this was updated :D

“Give us time, M-m-mummy,” he says softly. For a fleeting moment, he gives me a light squeeze, and before I can register his touch, he turns around and runs away, following Leia. I stare after him open-mouthed, rubbing the spot on my hand where he touched me.

aww. That is just like Luke's character. And Leia is spot on too.

I love when Anakin said: “Maiia has been a better mother figure for them so far,” he says barely audible. “And you... you could have returned to us, but you chose not to, and...and...” His voice cracks. “I don’t know if I’ll ever, ever forgi-“

I am glad he got that off his chest.

You write the tension and hurt so well.

i love it it is so sad and i love sob stories. please writhe more it is great

Wow. One of the best SW stories I have read, and after going on a binge, I've read many. No doubt RL has been even more frantic than usual, but I hope you update soon. You have a very intruging character in Maiia, and it would be great to see her fleshed out throughout upcoming chapters. -- And Padme! I can't wait to see if she walks again, or rather, how long it is until she's able to get out of that hoverchair.

I love your story, great details. It was really sad in some parts. I cannot believe that Leia would react like that. But at least there's some hope for Luke. I don't like Maiia though. I bet she's homewrecker and is probably jealous now that Padme is back. I really hope she won't get in the way of their relationship.

keep going. i added it to me c2 ok?