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FiveForFighting09
2009-05-25 . chapter 6
First, must I say that you did a good job in showing Tony's uneasiness around Lizzie when the story first started. I'm glad that you showed the way Tony slowly came around to the little girl and how by the end of the story, we were able to tell that Tony really cared for here- he gave up a marathon for her! :)

Anyway, I really enjoyed your story and I'm keeping my fingers crossed that someone you will write more on it.

Great ending. :)
Yosem Tiva
2009-02-20 . chapter 6
wow, really good story. keep it up.
--Yosem--
sb4ever
2009-02-08 . chapter 6
Very cute story. Characters seem pretty much in character for the most part. Liked how you had McGee be a good babysitter. Again, very cute.
Jo6470
2008-11-15 . chapter 6
This was the SWEETEST story! Tony as a daddy?!? I love it! I'd love to see a sequel to this one.
emsworth
2008-08-28 . chapter 6
Oh, this story was so cute! I love Tony gradually becoming adjusted to the idea of being a father and then totally embracing it by the end. The reactions of everyone else were spot on and utterly adorable.

I'd love to see more of the adventures of Tony and Lizzie.

Thanks,

Sirona
risingphoenix05
2007-11-18 . chapter 6
omg that is so sweet
Paperdaisies
2007-11-01 . chapter 6
I just randomly stumbled across this story and it made my day. I've read it a few times in the past and it even made me cry once. I might just add it to my favorite stories list so I don't forget it. It'd be interesting to see a short story on how Tony and Lizzie would be going after a few years. A couple of one-shots.

Anyway, thanks for sharing this one. It's beautiful.
Yasmine Lupin
2007-07-18 . chapter 6
Aw this fic was soo sweet! this is a side of Tony that we don't see ever! I love it! Congrts, ok? This fic was awesome!

See U!!
WritinginCT
2007-06-21 . chapter 6
This was great! I love happy Tony stories :)

One of the best lines ever in NCIS fanfic "Gibbs will know how to make it stop."

Kudos!
Transgenic-girl
2007-06-06 . chapter 6
Although I'm not usually a lover of cliches, I loved this story. Because rather than it being a bad fic (which I was initially worried about), it turned out great.

All your characters showed up true to form; Tony's daddy issues but underneath a big holder of honor, Ziva's initial distance from the child, but eventually joining in of the naming game, Ducky's jumping into a grandfather role, Abby buying Hot Topic baby clothes and suggesting gothic names while planning to temporary tattoo her honorary niece, and McGee's sweet 'i babysat in high school.'

Really, I loved it.
brezel11
2007-02-17 . chapter 6
Hey, that was really good! I read into the first chapter and when I realized this was babyfic I nearly stopped reading. But you got me! :-) This was very funny and well written. You made me believe Tony would cope with the situation in the way you described and you made me laugh (e.g. about the little goth onesie). Thank you for this wonderful story!
ArodLoverus2001
2006-12-02 . chapter 6
awesome story!! keep up the great work!
RachelGlasser
2006-12-01 . chapter 6
Aww, sweet Gibbs and Tony banter. Update soon!
bethellie
2006-12-01 . chapter 6
Ooh good ending. Good without too much cheesyness.
dottid
2006-12-01 . chapter 6
Awe. This was sweet. Tony seemed to matured during the story. I can see Gibbs sharing baby stories with Tony. Thanks for sharing this story.
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