You made me cry :(
Great story!

I am kind of confused as to how Rogue was killed but the rest of this story was so emotion filled it made me cry. Very beautifully written.

So...so...*sobs*

so sad, but so good!
i love it!

So sad! Yet so beautifully written!
Keep up the good work!

that was amazing, nothing less than i expected out of a writer as talented as you. i love your work and please keep it up.
veritas

OMG, you made me cry. I am shamelessly crying as I write this. So sad and yet so beautiful. "For his goddess, he would not break." This line was so beautiful. Wow, this story was well written, hell it was one of the best emotional stories I have read. Kudos!