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Vardonir
2008-04-22 . chapter 13
Dead or Dieing. LOL.

Update soon? Please?
Summer's boring.

~DVrdnr
Zaz9-zaa0
2008-04-22 . chapter 13
"Dead or dying?"

After that 'peace offering', I'm sure Larsa (as the peacekeeper that he claims to be... but we know better ;P) should definitely start looking over his shoulder in the case of homicidal kin more often... XD
Moonshine's Guide
2008-04-22 . chapter 13
It's all right. We're all guilty of it at one point or another.

This chapter was good. I liked it.

KEEP WRITING!
Vardonir
2008-01-26 . chapter 12
OMG. I forgot to review. Anyway... Please update soon! I'm trying not to go jumping fandoms, but with the number of good fanfics at the FFXII category, I might.

PS. Got a suggestion. although it's a cross. tell me if you wanna know.
Mega Mario
2007-10-28 . chapter 8
Humbubas are a type of werewolf, and regular wolves are mammals. So I don't think they would ay eggs.
jamielordofgingers
2007-10-23 . chapter 10
this is funny. i like Larsa's attemps to bring in new holidays and surfer style Cid is awesome. how about some holidays from other religions as well? i bet you could screw those up royally
Moonshine's Guide
2007-09-23 . chapter 11
Poor L. I almost forgot to review… sorry…

anyways… birthday presents… it would be ironic if zargabath( or however you spell his name) gave Larsa a book on how to get a girl… or something along those lines.

KEEP WRITNG!
Vardonir
2007-09-22 . chapter 11
Yay. You updated. (And made my day)
"Die scum"? I liked Ghis' last line, though. Write more.

PS. I dont think anyone will flame you for this story. it rawks! except maybe for the spelling and numerous grammar anomalies...
Zaz9-zaa0
2007-09-17 . chapter 11
Oi, if Larsa keeps up that nonsense, then I'm sure Vayne WILL kill him! XD
Unknown 2008
2007-08-15 . chapter 10
Man That's was so funny! Please update! I wanna know what's happens next!
Zaz9-zaa0
2007-07-05 . chapter 10
Lord Larsa the pyromaniac... Yeah, methinks I see that... :)
Vardonir
2007-07-05 . chapter 10
Yess! You UPDATED! Yay! Someone punch me! Or better yet, Kill me! (knocks on wood)

ahem. anyway. at first glance (at the inbox) I thought it was new year. Oh well.

Loved the "the fourth of July will be Fourth of July since Larsa day sounds silly" part. 'wish Larsa day DOES exist.

Anyhoo, write more! You made my day a lot more colorful.

~Xemnas.
Moonshine's Guide
2007-07-04 . chapter 10
Man, the Cid part was hilarious. I'm still laughing about that. I can't wait for the next chapter and the next hysterical scenario. KEEP WRITING!
ducksgoQUACK
2007-07-04 . chapter 10
Firstly: Larsa Day = Best holiday ever, ever. (Well, besides Christmas and Easter, but that's not the point. No wee little Emperor, no matter how charming, can possibly hope to compete with piles of gifts or chocolate.) So, on second thought, Larsa Day = Third best holiday ever, ever. :D

Several good lines in this one. The best two, in my opinion:
“No. I’m just bored and I think you Judges lighting your asses on fire will be amusing.”
(and)
“Larsa I feel that you are too young to be playing with fire and-“
“Cut the small talk and give me the damn lighter now brother!”
“Yes sir.” He said handing it to him.

Surfer Cid was also very entertaining. Thank God, poor Balthier wasn't around to sustain more damage to his psyche. :D Good job! ^_^ Update soon!
mikan
2007-05-20 . chapter 9
Just to give you an idea of how memorable this story is... I first read it a few months ago, and I remember laughing and snickering so much -- the way you write the Judges and Vayne and Larsa is absolutely hilarious! Unfortunately I forgot to add it to my favorites list, and lately I've been dying to read it again, so I just spent about half an hour scouring pages and pages of FFXII fics on this site just to find it! ^_^ So happy to spot it again! Thanks for writing this, and hope you write more FFXII humor -- I for one will be on the lookout for it! ^_^
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