Great story. Very original. I was hooked from the first sentence. :)

Wow. That was amazing. Very original - I've never thought of having that kind of power before. I like the way you wrote this. _

it's been a while since i read this, but now that i'm coming to more, and i've started writing, i understand the importance of reviews a little better.

i don't read many tcp stories, but this is one of the best tcp's i've ever read. it's very interesting and i think the "hero kid['s]" power is very creative.

definite thumbs up!

this is a really cool story. I liked the concept and the way it was told.

Fast-paced, involving, and thoroughly engrossing. I was riveted from beginning to end.

This is what I call Amazingly Great Story.

Edge of my seat the whole time! Keep it up.

Dude! sorry, instinctive reaction. I really liked it!

Gripping and suspenseful. The protagonist's power is interesting, original, and well thought out. I'd say a good story is one that grabs you from the opening sentence and doesn't let you go till the end. And this is just such a story. Well done, indeed.

Very good

Very good story. Very well written. One of those stories that keeps your attention. Good job.

Very good story. Very entertaining and well thought out. I love the character and the mutant power. Please continue to share your talent.

God this is *good*! This is, without a doubt, one of the best stories I've read in a l-o-o-ong time. Thank you very very much.