Reviews for Message in a Bottle

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huntsman34 2008-10-07 ch 14,	abuseThis is just bloody brilliant. Simply fantastic... I will quickly exhaust superlatives if I continue, but I will suffice to say that I adore your writing. Your Demon story (Read it on PK as "HP and the Demons Soul") was an absolute joy to read. I had only ever enjoyed one story as much. Although I never thought it possible, I am enjoying this story more. The mechanism of the future!Harry's influence on the past is great. So many stories have an older Harry taking over the younger one... he usually ends up in a relationship with either Hermione(which I grealty prefer) or Ginny. This has always troubled me as it is essentially an adult cavorting with a child. This masterpiece in the making allows incongruent knowledge to be not only believeable but blends it with the impetuousness of youth. You have diverted the course of events beautifully and captured the character of an abused child superbly. The relationship between Harry and Jaana is touching and was brought about at a perfect speed. I am extremely curious about Wynmae, the nature of the bonding and how this will affect future events... and finally as a die hard HHr shipper I cannot wait to see that relationship expanded upon in your inimitable and refreshing style. I have read an obscene amount of fanfiction about Harry Potter and I have never enjoyed a story so much. Whilst I hope your independent writing bears glorious fruit (and I will be buying it shoud it be published) I hope that you can find the time to continue this masterful work. Thank you so much for the story and the efforts. J
paul 2008-10-03 ch 14, anon.	abusewhat a great story i like it. im amazed that people found offence at the non grafic scene of drugged date rape that was stoped before it begane. i cant wait to read your next chaptor keep the quil scribbling..
gaul1 2008-10-01 ch 14,	abusegood chapter, wonders if the portait over flintwick with philgus nigelus black, comes to play with the title of the book, keep up the good work, byes
BYoshi1993 2008-10-01 ch 14,	abuseWOW! I really like this story, it's fantastic. I really hope to see an update soon because I'm dying in anticipation. Good luck with the next chapter. -Michael
Rurouni209 2008-09-28 ch 3,	abuseHo...ly...**... this is probably the most abusive I've ever seen the Dursleys in any fic, and I've read over a dozen fics where the Dursleys were violent towards Harry in one way or another. I probably think this because of the teachers at his primary school usually having some sort of sympathy to offset all the abuse, but in this, he has pretty much nothing. I literally almost cried (no joke).
thyrokio 2008-09-16 ch 13,	abuse** awesome! nicelly done rlly.
Wolfric 2008-09-04 ch 14,	abuseI am quite happy to have stumbled onto your fine story. A couple of questions occurred to me: How was Hagrid able to read the title of the book? Won't killing Lucius make getting the diary harder? Does Harry have a biological sister? It seem like there was some reference to a sister in the early chapters. Is Harry going to learn occlumensy, to guard his secrets? I suppose many of these things will become clear in time... I quite like your story telling style. Thanks for writing. W.
BlackDemonAngel 2008-09-04 ch 14,	abuseUPdate son B.D.A
tumshie 2008-08-30 ch 14,	abuseThis wonderful fic was recommended to me by my online friend Vern, along with Harry's Bad Hair Day. I think you have written a very original story and have to say that it is very well written and plotted. I look forward to your further updates
stoneloyalthree 2008-08-30 ch 14, anon.	abuseLove your story. The changes Harry has done to the time line are well done. Hope you update soon.
351ccouagr 2008-08-29 ch 14,	abusethis is a great story so far, but when are you going to bring back hermione? will it be any time soon? or not till hogwarts? or is she not coming back at all? that would be a same. but great story so for i really like it. please don't forget hermione.
redfoxmoon 2008-08-29 ch 14,	abuseGood chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! The book can only be read by Harry, right? At least most of it? Other people see different things right?
phoebe turner 2008-08-29 ch 14, anon.	abusei loved it!
twilliams1797 2008-08-28 ch 14,	abuseI'm glad I stumbled across this story again, and I remember it as one of my favorites, but I had lost the link.. too bad about Portkey, they are turning into a strangely unhelpful place..Another of my favorite authors was banned from there recently, so you are in good company. I like this story and I will keep the link in a safe place this time.. TimW
ROBERT-19588 2008-08-28 ch 14,	abuseGood story, I am enjoing reading it. Harry needs to remove all the tracking charms off of himself. Harry's book needs to be hidden. Jaana needs to tell Harry what she has done to his book. I am glad Harry is making friends with Luna and is trying to befriend Hermione. It would be nice if Harry, Hermione, & Luna could be friends befor Hogwarts.

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