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| beserkerbeast 2008-06-18 ch 1,  | abusethe storys good so far I dont like garra as a monster but it works, I do like how ino is potrayed. I hate her keep up the good work |
| Kaishi-chan 2008-04-06 ch 12, | abuseAww kawaii! I |
| bunnie booo from runey 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseI luv the story so far. Great job! |
| ursula 2007-12-09 ch 5, anon. | abusei love it, nice job. You are a good writer. =] :} |
| Uzumaki Sharuto 2007-06-22 ch 4, | abuse*grins cheekily.* Very nice.*Start running fingers through my brown hair.* I mean it. Well this brunette boy is seriously addicted to your story. |
| Uzumaki Sharuto 2007-06-21 ch 3, | abuseexcellent |
| oymygodimonfire! 2007-06-05 ch 12, anon. | abuseawsome. Best one ive read. |
| Mizuni-no-neko 2007-06-03 ch 2, | abuse*cries* Gaara's just misunderstood! T-T * reads fluffy GaaraxLee fic* there all better now! |
| stupid kid/IS ANGRY 2007-05-11 ch 12, anon. | abuseWHY DID KAANKURO HAVE TOII DIE YOU JERK! IT MADE ME CRY!I DONT CRY FOR STORYS!IT HURTS! |
| stupid kid 2007-05-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseino is a fat ** and you are a smart kid hehe |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 2007-04-29 ch 12, | abuseNice, very nice indeed! |
| AllinaMae 2007-04-05 ch 5, | abuseH0kay. i've figured out what I wanted to say...But I apologize for sounding like a ** X_x;; I think that your style is... very 'lay it all out on the table' i think and instead maybe you should try milking some situations more and getting deeping into them so it doesn't sound so plain :). And I didn't mean the dialogue was corny xP..it's actually great hehe it's just how you lead into dialogues :3... But yea. I feel really stupid because ...iunno ..I just do >< forgive me |
| AllinaMae 2007-04-04 ch 4, | abusem as I'm reading...you story's presentation/dialoge is a bit..."corny"? I would say. I really don't know how to give suggestions in writing so I'm at a loss for now (maybe something'll come up later :D) But the storyline's great :D (although...skia + chouji = bestfriendsforever. It's hard to imagine them not being that way XDD) More reviews later! *is on Chapter 4* |
| HinataNaruto 2007-03-31 ch 2, | abuseDoes Ino still like Shika? |
| rAnDoMnEsS iS fUnNy!! 2007-03-23 ch 10, anon. | abusegah jiraya you perv... i love comenting its so much fun great story we have alot in common except age... |