I don't care if you say you've retired from writing fan fiction-

YOU BLOODY BETTER WRITE A SEQUEL TO THIS AND SOON!

Unless of course, you want me 2 sue you for with holding us from Charlie, Dean, Sam, Alex and Becca.

Got it? Heck, just get someone else to post it, just write a bloody sequel.

Mortal Days

P.S- my days are mortal no with no sequel. Oh, in the sequel, could you try to add Alex up with someone. I hate him being a loner.

Still, that's for when you write the sequel.

Wow! Just WOW!I'm speechless.

Great story!

great first chapter can wait to read the rest

oh my god. thats a awesome story. i hope HOPE that there is a sequal!

cant wait to read more!

well done

:):)

(anime water fall tears) Wah! Charlie died! But it was a greate story and I hope you continue writing stories cause your doing a great job!

made me cry! your a very talented writer, good timing by the way. You think Dean will die at the end of the season?

AAhh! is that it? that was really good very long. but do you live in utah? not very many people would have put utah in there. but great job. it was so good. if my e-mail doesn't show up on this thing it is you should e-mail me and tell me if you are from utah or not.

YAY an update! Great job!

Dean and Charlie? Perfect. :) Just hope she doesn't regret it tomorrow. Sam? You sure he'd sleep with her that quickly? I mean, he just seems more of the guy to maybe kiss her but tell her to chill for a bit, you know? Either way, great story! :)

Oh man. I absolutely freaking love this story. It's very original. And I love Charlie. She's very cool! Waiting for the next update!

l love it please update soon

Stevie was standing in the kitchen, simply staring at a bag of potatoes.

LMFAO

I don't know what it was about that line, but I just busted out laughing! He's just STARING at a bag of potatoes! XD

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Fantastic. Can't wait for more.

OMG! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE!

this is good! plz update! poor charlie!