I must admit, this is an interesting story. This is one of the few where all the main teen characters are not enemies. To have Zukao azula aang, and Jet working together as a team was a dynamic I haven't seen before and yet you made it workd rather well. The chemistry between Zuko and Katara was very intense and enjtoyable when they got along together. Though I will admit to not feeling or seeing any chemistry in between Azula and Haru. While I know the story isn't supposed to focus on them, their relationship feels like an add on to give both siblings a mate.

One think I feel went too far is the angst and Zuko's constant fighting against everything feels wrong. I know he denial of the bond is driven by his duty to his country but if knowing that such a match would be considered sacred, I would think such a joining would strengthen his clan and people even without the treaty his politcal marriage would gain him. His blind refusal to it seems overly obtuse, even for Zuko's stubborn character, especially with Azula so openly acepting her own mate. I can understanding wanting to protect Katara as they get closer and deeper into danger. But still She'd have better chances of survival and escaping danger with the powers of an immortal psychic vampire. More attention is drawn to her in her current state. And after all the blood and fighting is over, he has the choice to stop being a hunter. He would and should fight to keep what he holds dear, not push it away. That is the best way to ensure it's destruction. If anything the extreme angst between Zuko and Katara reminds me of the conflicts between the characters Miaka and Tamahome in Fushigi yuugi only about two or three times even more angst ridden because Zuko has little basis to fight them being together.

Another thing I felt a bit odd or a bit of a cheat is you have vampires that seem to have no real weakness. THey can travel in the day, no vulnerability to holy artifacts is evern shown, weakness to fire not exsistant, at least to fire benders, no mention of any of the classic vampire traits. Even some vampires don't even need blood and those that do never need to kill and can survive on animals with no weakened state or repercusions aside from needed a larger volume of blood. With the exception to having those who surrender to blood lust due to being dark natured as any human or starvation. Vampires are a dark being, a monster yet you've made them little more than an immortal being with better strength and speed and even the ability to heal others greater than even the top water benders.

Wonderful wonderful story. Absolutely love it and will take up your challenge and make a sequel. Just don't kill me if it's awful.

The rain scene was just incredible, it left me a crying mess! You're writing is just too beautiful and the characterization is spot on. I love this! :)

Oh my, this fic is too fantastic to describe in words! The relationship you've built between katara and zuko is absolutely heart wrenching but oh so good. And I am glad you decided to fully continue with it, can't wait till the end! :)

kissing in the rain, love confessions in the rain, and zuko being an idiot. Wow. The clicheness and awesomeness is still being processed...

Azula is so cool! I love this so far.

i love ur story its so original

i cant believe you can write so well for something you're /not even/ fully committed to.

this is one of the greats ;]
por supuesto.. excuse my awful spanish.. i got a C+ in that class..

anywho.. this is good writing.. captivating plot.. and also, it reeks of originality.

congrats. (i wonder how you say that in spanish. well. i wouldn't know).

bb =)

excellent!

I must say, this storyline caught my attention since chapter one. I could hardly walk away from it and that's rare. Especially since it was an Avatar FF and Zatara. Great work. =]

LMAO! AHH!! So funny!

trying to expose the society!!?!?! no they wouldn't! Great chapter!!

"All in the hands of destiny..." WOW!! Great chapter!

OMG! wow what a chapter! AMAZING!

I don't really want to wait till I finished the last chapter before I gave my review, but all I can say is, excellent read. However, one thing that irks me is that Katara is kinda a bit more of a damsel in distress for most part, and she's pretty dense. I actually like the character of Azula better.