this is good so far. i like your style of writing. Update soon!

nice! i really liked it, especially the ending

although, i always thought that Toph's mother had never actually written to her - i thought the bounty hunters had faked the note to lure her to them. well, maybe im wrong..

anyways, great story, and I'd love to read the next installment soon!

whats the pairings oh and great chapter

i heart it, please continue!

I like it so far :) please continue