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brighette
2006-12-01
ch 3,
abuseJust got caught up - so you're tag teaming Nevermore? Hmm, guess I have more reading to do this weekend...

Lots of DVD's = agorophobic? Man, remind me never to invite you to my house, you might think I'm a hermit ;) How many DVD's, you ask? Probably around 350 or so...it's scary, I guess!
Nana56
2006-11-29
ch 3,
abuseOK, I'll check it out. This was a really good start to, apparently, something much larger. Thanks for this part...I liked it a lot!
CatBeist
2006-11-28
ch 3,
abuseBesides all the love... I forgott to tell you that I'm beginning to miss Laura a bit... I mean... if anyone is to get Dean I would be fine with it beeing Laura :) And tell Krip that... :) haha...
Antigone11
2006-11-28
ch 3,
abuseThis has been an intriguing couple of chapters, but I am confused as to where to go next. There isn't a typed URL as part of your Author Notes, as far as I can tell.

I'm especially interested in hearing about Dean's destiny. One of my main "irks" with the show is that Dean seems at best superfluous to the main mytharc and at worst an actual liability (his susceptability to mind control). I don't care if Dean has 'powers' of his own, but I want him to have his own role in the coming war, not just as "Protector of Sam".
Nvrmore
2006-11-28
ch 3,
abuseLove the chapter...You know that.

Love the brotherly banter. Love the thoughts and insights they get into each other and how your write that.

I like Dean's concern at the end, not sure if he really wants to get involved with more ... freaks. :) Ah Meg...how we ...loved (?) you.

Looking forward to more from ya.
MaceyAnne
2006-11-28
ch 3,
abuseI will definitely be following the links, you've got me hook, line and sinker!! Thanks for sharing with us!
sams1ra
2006-11-28
ch 3,
abuseOh, loved how you and nevermore tied up the storylines. I was wondering about the email Sam got on her story. Loved the new characters – the children and their powersGood work.
CatBeist
2006-11-27
ch 2,
abuseIt's not slow... and if you were to write mindblowing action chapters every freakin time I would have been exhausted... And there is a need in the story to be buildt up, to where you do kick some fysical and mentall Winchester ass... and then some demonic ass... And all this does not mean that this chapter is slow... I like it... and like it alot.. and I say that every time I say anything... lol.. but the words doesn't mean anything less just because I say them all that often...
And I'll be waiting for your next chapter... more than I'm waiting for christmas to come faster... !
That was that... :D
snchills
2006-11-27
ch 2,
abuseWhat what, wheres another chapter. I got to the end of chapter two and now I want more. Update update!
MaceyAnne
2006-11-27
ch 2,
abuseOh, I love this side of Dean, he can be so sweet and sensitive and then be a complete jerk! Love it! Also love this;

“Anything in here?” Sam asked opening the bedroom door all the way and knocking his brother deep into the closet.

“Hey! Careful Francis… that’s valuable property…” Dean called grinning as he backed out of the closet with a two foot by two foot fireproof lock box in his hands.

“Your best asset huh?” Sam teased.

“Damned straight… any eye of newt in the pantry?”

Hee, Hee, you do the boys banter very well!

Thanks for sharing!
sams1ra
2006-11-27
ch 2,
abuse“Dean…you and diaries… what’s up with that?” hee hee. Poor girl. But I'm sure the boys will make it right. Right?
Nvrmore
2006-11-26
ch 2,
abuseYeah! You got it posted!

So good. I love how Dean gets into things involving children. His softer side.

Love the brotherly banter...especially the "...you and diaries..." line. Hee hee. You write the boys' interactions very well.
Nana56
2006-11-26
ch 2,
abuseGood start. Looking forward to more!
brighette
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseWoohoo, two ongoing SN stories now! Did Christmas come early?? M, I sense yummy yummy Dean angst ;)
sams1ra
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abusePoor Dean, such weight on his shoulders… and you beat me to a plot bunny! I had something similar cooking (well, not the dying for him part but, yeah) and you probably should have put up a warning about spoilers. Not everyone's from the US, you know…
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