Please,Please update, Shawn.

Great work, I was at edge of my seat all the time.

totally cool, can't wait for the next chapter. hope you update really soon.

this is pretty cool! what happens now? i'm dying to know, literally i am! tell me now!

Lol, yeah, I had to read this again. I love it, too much.

Mali

Excellent! Very sad parts though! Actually brought tears to my eyes. You conveyed emotions very well!

Well between the sad songs I'm listening to and this story I'm going to turn into an emotional wreck! Fantastic chapter, I'm still upset about the loss of Adam but I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. Well Done and update soon!

Wow, this chapter was so devastating... You've managed to capture the intense emotional atmosphere very well. As an Adam fan, I am curious to know how he died exactly... Great work -I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!

wow..this was interesting and as well as capturing..I can't wait

until the next chapter is up!

Wow...that was a damn good first chapter. Although I'm quite upset that Adam has been killed already I will definately look out for the next part of the story. Great fic, very engaging!

Wonderful piece of work. Very dramatic begining to what promises to be an epic story. I can't wait to read what you have coming next.

DAMN SHAWN!

*sniffles* AW!

Knowing what I know about this story, I'm seriously afraid to read the next parts...I cried over this one, the next ones are going to be hard as hell to read. You are such a good author! Keep up the fantastical work!

*ME*