I really like this so far. You have some really good ideas. I never once gave thought to how Kusabi's were born in the manga...it's not impossible...

Yee! Can't wait for the next chapter!

A wonderful read, and quite angsty, if I may say so!

Good job on the descriptive language, it's hard to live up to the description that the art provides in the legit media.

You may want to run spell check before you put it up, but other than that, I have no complaints!

WOW, loveing this fic! poor enju! kim glad to know im not the only one who thinks they should be together! whats going to happen to myobi? update!

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i would snap at you for taking so long... but i want you to continue updating so i won't XD

great job, and good job creating the Alichino /Kusabi birth scenario, very creative _

and please... update just a tad sooner next time, and a longer chapter as well... please ? ::looks hopefully::

lol well i hope you're doing well,

ta ta!

Ah! I love how Ryoko just fainted like that. But.. Enju is taking the news rather well, hm? o.o?

-nods- please do! i love enju!

? what the hell! poor enju...he was already suffering enough as it was...

Oh my god It's getting so good. I love Ryo/Enju This story is really captivating.. Gosh, Myoubi's pregnant too... I can't wait for the next chapter? DD

updating will make me a very happy reader...

updating soon will make me a very VERY happy reader...

i love this story, but try to proof read, you have a few typos, but it is no biggie.

ta ta!

Hi, please go on, and please, please don't let this end in Myobi/Ryoko, I hate her

Please continue!Enju/Ryoko is my favorite couple