I've always liked the cartoon brainiac 5. He seemed like the "awkward, geeky-dorky kid" of the group. Love seeing insight on him. He is one of my fave characters on the show, following Superman himself and Bouncing Boy.

I didn't want to read this at first but I loved it! (laughs)

Very well written. I like Brainiac Five's perspective and the addition of the Puppet story. I can never remember how to spell the puppets name so I won't bother... I also liked Brainy going along with the non-logial activity at the end. Very sweet. I hope you'll write more LoS fanfiction in the future.

ME: AUGH!
Sister: be quiet!! Can I get on the internet now?
Me: NO, I'm reading about Brainy! AUGH!
Sister: Well, stop screaming!
ME: No, AH!
Sister: At least give a decent review.
Me: -taking deep breaths- yeah, that makes sense...
Sister: -rolls eyes- oh brother...
Sister; When you're done giving your 'decent review', get off, or I'll sit on you- no, wait, you're violent. you'd sit on me right back! I'll just go find dad...
Me: Fine, fine fine fine fine, now shoo, and don't live long or prosper!!
Sister: That's fine I plan to move to Vulcan when I'm 18.
Me: Well, just have your OCs shuttle you there in a space ship while my OCs try and kill you, ok?
Sis: No can do, babycakes. I'm too young to die...
Me: So what shall we review?
Sis: Missing "a" in the first paragraph.
Me: Oh, anything else?
Sis: No, that's it.
Me: Well, then, the Review is over, I guess.
Sis: How come you made me say what you thought?
Me: because I'm the one typing.
Both of us: Keep WRITING!

Excellent. Very, very well done. I can practically hear Brainy's voice as the narrator. Very good introspective story. Applause!

Honestly, I read this one on DeviantArt. Dude, I can't believe YOU'RE the person that drew that awesome "Brainiac Stretchin'" and the other Brainiac sketches pictures! Oh, and my brother loves your newest Brainiac picture. Your Lightning Lad is so pretty, too! But the feet are a bit squishy-looking to me. Sorry, I'm just being a ranting fan.

Anyway, the first time I tried this fic, I didn't have any intrest in it at ALL. Probably because I read your other one first and wanted more Superman+Brainiac mush. I kinda scanned through it, didn't find much, and then closed it.

But then, I was at the library and I was really bored, so I just went to your DeviantArt profile thing, and started reading, and I found it was REALLY GOOD. I was like, "Darn, why in the world did I never read this? Who cares if it doesn't have Superman in it-- THIS IS AWESOME!"

So, yeah. You really have a talent for writing Brainiac dialect/dialouge (don't know which one in this sense). It's still so hard for me.

To quote Spock: 'Fascinating' This is a really brilliant look inside the head of someone wrestling with the concept of humanity. I'd never even heard of LoSH until your stuff started popping up, and because of how you've written this, I think I'm starting to get hooked too ;)

I loved it! Brainy is my new obsession. ^^
Anyways. I know that you will probably never do it, but maybe you could write the story about how the animated LSH (before superman) got together. I'm dying of curiosity.
If you can will you? Pretty please (does big puppy dog eyes)
fanficfreak

Swet! LSH animated fanfiction already! Brainiac 5 is my favorite character too. Anyway, this is great and very well written. Keep up the great work! I'll be looking forward to more stories from you as well as new episodes of LSH!

New favorite story!

-dies-

Brainy: -poke- She means well. -pokepoke-

Me: Stop poking me, it's annoying.

Brainy: Meep! O.o Scary lady.

Me: You are so OOC today...

Brainy: Whee, distraction! -trips-

Anyway... I find the use of overly complicted technical terms amusing, mainly because my intelligence quotient is less than negative infinity. That aside, it was highly elucidating. And IC. D'OH, I'VE TURNED INTO BRAINY! Does that mean he's me?

Brainy: -pokepokepokepokepokepokepokepokepoke-... my finger hurts now.

Me: Yep.

Brainy: Whee, 'nother distraction! -trips again-

AH :D! I love your stories so much! This one was awsome! Please keep writing LoSH fics! You portray the characters so well!

One word. Awesome. That's all. Awesome.

Love it! Just thought your #1 fan on LW should phraise you on here as well.