A Denethor who yielded to Faramir's request might well have been this reasonable.

I can't believe I only just found this story. I really enjoyed it - your characterizations were spot on.

A very interesting premise and a great story. Very well-written, but your stories always are. :)

Hi Altariel,
I liked this story very much. I was surprised many times because you played with my expectations. This is a very interesting AU story because of it's construction which due to the wording still manages to transport a good Tolkien feeling. The personalities are somewhat weaker than I built them in my mind, but this can be a natural result of AU writing ;-) .
Many thanks for a good fanfiction work.
elanor

-Interesting and thought provoking.

A wonderful AU, bleak but slowly turning, like spring from winter, to hope, as Denethor and Eowyn see their loved ones returning from the East.

Denethor is well-drawn here; and it's nice to see an AU where Eowyn was never infatuated with Aragorn.

I do hope that Merry and Pippin survived, though. And I wonder who defeated Shelob - Sam or Faramir, or both together.

Very interesting and even more surprising! :)

brillant is the only word. a twist in the road and the difference it makes.

Interesting alternate take on things. Well done.

- Deandra

It's great to read a new story from you, Altariel. It's excellently written.