Wow, this was really good. It was short and sweet, and I couldn't have asked for anything more! I have to say, it seemed to be missing a little emotion on Cloud's part, but I think it was still really good! I also must admit that it made me cry, if only a little bit though. (Trying to act tough)
Okay, Okay! I was crying my eyes out! Ugh, you'd think I'd be used to these sad stories with this scene but...Ah I can't hold the tears back!
Anyway, it was really good! Great job.

I like it! It made me sad, but it was good. (And now I need fluff and chocolate to cheer me up... I'm really too emo for deathfics.)

If you do follow through with the plan of different perspectives, I'll read 'em... *nudge nudge*