I would like you to continue. I just can't wait for Tamora Pierce to publish the acual book. It supposed to come out in 2012. Ugh, 2 years. I really like this story and hope you continue it.

I think that this is an excellent story! My only critique is your chapters could be longer. I like Evvy. More people should write about her!Please continue!

Interesting story. I've always wondered what Luvo was exactly. I suppose you might make him a monkey, that would be interesting...

hokay, so, just lettin' y'all know - there IS a Tamora Pierce work out (y'know, actually WRITTEN by her) called the Melting Stones that has to do with everything that happened in between the street magic book and the will of the empress book: the catch? it's only on audio. it's performed by Full-Cast Audio, check it out. i have yet to listen, but i'm trying to find it. P.S. it's supposed to be coming out in print in the next few years. check out TP's site.

happy reading!

-dsp

E! WRITE MORE! It's good, but it would also be good if the chapters where longer!

I like this. ...Do we ever actually find out, in the published books, what Luvo is? Or what happened to all of them? I feel I've missed something in the books, but maybe not. Whatever. I like this! :)

Love it! Though you are making Evvy act kind of old, you might want to say her age, just to clear it up. And you take to long to update, but I still love! Write more soon!

Good chapter, looking forward to the next one! :)

I like your story, but didn't it say in the story that Evvy's parents are dead or she doesn't know who they are. Luvo is a walking talking rock creature.

Update soon!

I am in love with this story! Please update soon!

I like this alot. You're writing is very good, and the story itself is certainly interesting. I hope you plan on updating again soon. There really aren;t enough stories about this.

Ciao XP

Kirril

Love it! write more soon!

SO glad you got to update!

Sad to hear you were grounded...

Good chapter!

- New Moon Werewolf

good prologue. please update quickly.

I always wondered what happened during the war... thanks for writing it!

Update soon!

- New Moon Werewolf