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supergirl3684
2007-10-19
ch 10,
abuseI loved this fic!! I can understand why Darry was mad at sunny! heck, i'd be ** off too! :) Looks like sunny is in it for the long haul now though!

one little favor / begging thing...I know you're writing "Family Tree" and you've shown Pony and Soda in trouble and I know that Darry is 21 but still...even 21 year olds get in trouble...any way we can see how Sunny would deal with Darry if Darry decided to have himself a day of rebellion?
meh
2007-07-17
ch 2, anon.
abuseO_o ... lemon-pepsi? Aw, PB is so shildish! >_< luv it
bluesweetie1978
2007-06-02
ch 10,
abusehey great story
edwards other bella
2007-04-04
ch 10,
abusewow...maybe i should have read this one first...i read teh squeal...i really like it and it makes so much more sense now...kepp going..another squeal or something...
Honeydukes013
2007-02-11
ch 10,
abuseI really really really liked this!! Do make a sequel!
Has.Been.Deleted
2007-02-09
ch 10,
abuseaw thats the end? I don't want it to end :(
Soda is Sexy
2007-02-09
ch 9,
abuseAww, how sweet! Is this the end? This is a really good story!
xodamhsoirxo
2007-02-07
ch 10, anon.
abuseThat was sweet, Darry's a little brother :P Please write a sequel, I beg of you! You're such a good writer, The Outsiders section of FF needs more of you!
Smile because it happened
2007-02-07
ch 10,
abuseAh please do a sequel! i wanna see how Shay fits in with the Curtis family and how Darry copes with having to share Soda and Pony with him. I think Darry and Shay would have very different ideas on how to raise kids, esp with Shay's swearing and hitting Soda! That in itself has potential for a gd plot line!

Sequal please!!
x
Dallysangel
2007-02-07
ch 10,
abuseAW I love that ending it's perfect so sweet.
dreamer 3097
2007-02-06
ch 10,
abusethis is good
BenchBreaker
2007-02-06
ch 10, anon.
abuseWHAT??!! thats it? i vote u write a sequel right now!!
DracosDefender
2007-02-06
ch 10,
abuseSEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!
well..im sure u get the isea...*coughsequelcough*
rowlinglover222
2007-02-06
ch 10,
abuseYEY. That was great. I hope you come up with a sequel because you have wonderful ideas.
mystic87
2007-02-06
ch 10, anon.
abuseSequel! Cool! Sequels are fun! Sweet, but quick ending! I'd love to see some longer chapters!
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