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Reviews For: Helping Big Brother

Tony WildRiver
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuselol! I could just see the look on Byakuya's face.
Ichigo's darker side Shiros...
2007-01-18
ch 1,
abuseYou could have done more with it. Although the Byakuya soccer ball incident was totally hillarious.
Lazy2login
2006-11-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved this part... Soul Society is sick of being invaded.
BlackBrightField2007
2006-11-25
ch 1,
abusewow ! that's great!! hahaha...byakuya's afraid of ball!!
Rambie
2006-11-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseAmusing, but needs work with grammar and mechanics.
Tacky76
2006-11-24
ch 1,
abuseLOL This is so cute. I loved it!

Keep up the good work I'll be reading
RAMEN-monster
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuseLMAO! so funni storyy! i love irtt!
mlewis
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was awesome. I love it
KittiKat626
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuseLOL! That was very cute! I really like it, especially the part with the soccer ball! I flinch when I see 'em, too, because my sister likes soccer and I have ended up in a few bad situations with the balls. :D

Anyway, this was really good! I hope to see more stuff by you soon!

~KittiKat
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