Yes, keep writing!!

aw! THEY WERE ALL SO CUTE! Good work!!

Huh. I'm left feeling a little unsatisfied by this. I think it's cause you ended it without writing the sin and the absolution. ^^ I'm no good at chapter/story names.

Ha, wow. Hisoka being an empath got drunk off of emotions to escape his own pain. Typical of him. XD Another one-word misspelling. I feel bad for those two, very little progress still. It's quite naive for Hisoka to think that fear/pain that deep can be erased with time, though both can heal, and suddenly I'm reminded of something Xena said about throwing a rock into a pond. The surface goes back to being calm, but the rock's still there. :) I absolutely loved the surprise in Tsuzuki's desk too. ^.~

Hmm.. Predictable but cute vignette you have here. ^^ Only one spelling error, and good flow. I guess the only issue I had was that the beginning didn't connect with your characterization of Hisoka too well. Did he feel that his striving for perfection was 'empty, cold and soulless' or that perfection in itself was like that? This chapter was really melancholy and didn't feel satisfying to me. Probably because nothing was resolved. Next chapter~! :D

Ok I was trying to read all of them and then repile but I can't. I LOVE YOUR STORIES!! So much yummy yaoi and smexy I'm starting to have nose bleeds. Keep it up! ^w^

*cries*

This is really sweet!

With all the Mur/Tsu floating around (not to knock anybody's chosen pairing... but that one squigs me out), this was a nice change of pace. Yay! ^_^ OTP! Tsusoka fluff! Keep it up!

This was pretty good; I loved the overall ideas! Please continue to write!

Aw...I love this chapter n_n Tsuzuki it´s so damn sweet! Now I want a sequel T_T please? Keep writing =)

aw that was so cute!! you're really amazing at this ^_^ I only was bugged by this one little grammer error that a LOT of people make >< "than" and "then" ... but it's ok, the fic was just so well written that I don't care XD they weren't really OOC, I think if circumstances allowed they would both have acted in this manner. I hope you intend to write more, because I will definitely be reading it ^_^
~Rin

So sweet!^^ Please update soon!^^

Nicely written, Ahria. Umm...I don't suppose you'd consider a sequel? Picking up at where Tsuzuki is "ready" to speak to Hisoka?

Are you crazy!? 'Keep writing TsuzuSoka'!?

Of course! You're one of the best Yami no Matsuei fic writers I've seen!

(By the way, I

No, definitely keep writing. You seem to have a wonderful theme of Hisoka and Tsuzuki inching towards a real relationship; pain, sadness, madness, and sorrow and all. I hope you keep going!