I really enjoyed reading this. I like the idea of Tomoyo as the rebound girl. Very nicely done :)

aww!...very cute how Tomoyo gets all flustered and what-not. I really like this! =D

You should make a sequel that you should... so kawaii!^^

Kawai! I'm telling u that u simply hv 2 hurry up n update!

wow...

it is a wonderful story...

And you ended in a way or imagination may take us...