 secretsakura 2009-12-13 . chapter 1D:
You... you KILLED BB!
How could you? -bursts into tears-
...But not really. XD
I liked this. Very long. But I think you made Raven cry a lot over things she wouldn't normally feel emotion over. Kinda OOC, you know? But then again, the love of her life IS dead, so...
I liked Johnny. But I thought the names were strange. |
 Sugar-Laced-Lie 2009-10-12 . chapter 1This was an excellent read! I enjoyed every minute of it! |
 Little Miss Juliet 2007-11-24 . chapter 1OMG! I love it! I'm not quite sure about what it was, (BBTer/BBRae), but it almost made me cry. |
 RxS4Lyfe 2007-02-02 . chapter 1That was beautiful. Simply beautiful. |
 Musa Rox 2007-01-03 . chapter 1*sob*
So... BEAUTIFUL! *cries*
This is a little scary and depressing... but it's so good! And I was kinda confused with Coolgirl... couldn't you have just used Bumblebee? And maybe some sequal fics about "The New Titans" AKA the kids? |
 Caesardire 2006-12-27 . chapter 1Ah, I loved it. You've gotten everyon's personality just right. I especially like the twist you did with Terra taking care of Raven's daughter. Brilliant. |
 For the 19th Time 2006-12-20 . chapter 1((tosses empty tissue box onto floor)) Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Wonderful job, merry christmas. |
 xnecro 2006-11-28 . chapter 1I think we would all love to hear more from the kids, about Vanessa's devloping powers and what if she discovered her true demonic heritage how would her brother react how would Raven hanndle it so I ask you, please do some form of squeal to continue a story which deserves to be more than just a one-shot |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 2006-11-26 . chapter 1A very good and touching story. Marvelous interaction between Terra and Raven, and excellent job with the children.
Keep the good writing. |
 Beast of Brisingr 2006-11-25 . chapter 1Dude you rock! I like the way you worded that tid-bit at the end! |
 Zergplex 2006-11-25 . chapter 1Marvelous story. I loved the children (though usually children don't inherit both of their parents powers), Vanessa reminded me quite a bit of Raven even before they mentioned her heritage. Terra and Raven's conversation I think showcased the changes in them over the years. Age for them brought maturity and this conversation allowed them to admit to their past mistakes and begin to make amends. This may have just been a one shot, but I would be very interested in seeing more of this alternate future of the Titans. A chance to see Raven rejoining the Titans, to see that even as things change some things stay the same (their friendship). I would also love to see more on Vanessa and Johnny, though young they intrigue me, especially Vanessa. Well I need to head off, sorry for the short review. Have a great day!
-Zergplex |