I like this story! Kairi totally hates Sora and meets him but she doesn't even know its him. I wonder what will happen if she finds out... Update soon please!

The first chapter is nice. I liked the story I can't wait to read the next chapter! Good luck and work hard!

Hey, I really like this. A lots.

I love this. I really do. I mean, I was sitting here alternating from singing 'Mad world' to saying 'Oh. My. God.' And 'FOSHIZZLE!' when something weird happened. Heehe! Pure genius.

very good so far

i wonder how tough it is for kairi being the only hirl that doesnt like sora . she even met him and doesnt even know. the was great for a first chapter i have so many qouestion but the one i wnt to know most is the tourist attraction of paradise. He also tells us that he tells what and i so want to know the big deal is please UPDATE SOON

This is an awesome chapter! I like where this is going and I look forward to reading more. Update soon :D