Such a good story. Bravo my friend, bravo.

Excellent! Great Story!

i should have known something was up when i read HKSS which means but one thing...your one of bobcas cohorts >.>

ah well good story. though i couldnt help but to chuckle upon reading the part of the hkss...lets just face it. that whole part is funny

I Really liked the poem in this story. Do you think your friend would allow me to use it?

And of course the story is really good to =), I almost started crying when Shinobu "fell" down from the roof. I think you managed really good to transfer what she was feeling to the reader ( in this case me ) And i hope you'll write some more stories. And if they are as good as this one I'll surley read them =)

YES YES YES! this is exactly how the story should have gone! I LOVE IT! keep up the good work!

All I can say is "WOW" I injoyed reading this one