I love this story! please make more chapters ASAP!

oh...i loved this chapter!
T-T took me so long to go and read it though. so sorry!
i love how hikari reacts to the doctor! and so sweet of mushra to hold her hand when getting the shot.
but...i see a short story idea for you that i'm dying to see :D
the mushra one with the doctor in town :D...i really hope you will write that one down to show us cause i know it will be great and i love your writing!

keep up the good work and see you at the next chapter!

yah shots are bad i had a shot with a needle real thick once ouch it hurt all day. nice chapter more more more!

Haha, I understand your fear. For me it's spiders. (gulps) And bugs in general...

Kikomei: It is sad...Airiko has that fear too...

Airiko: Shut it you! You're afraid of dodgeballs...

Kikomei: AM NOT!!

Sigh...my brain is hurting from the exertion of controlling two freaky people in my mind...

Anyways...Mushra is so nice! Wish he would hold my hand! :(
Another awesome chapter, and i can't wait for the next adventures of Hikari!

I have the same problem.. needles .. I'm freaking out when i see one ! xd.
But i lke the chapter !

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O_O... *Sniff* That was short and cute. Yeah, needles don't bother as much. It's just the liquid inside of them that I'm afraid of. TT_TT I mean what if the doctor gave you the wrong shot? It could happen. Anywho, I look foorward, more as, I can't wait (literally) for the next chapter ^~^

Once when I got a shot I freaked out so badly. I got lighthead and fell to the floor.

The story is really good soo far, "What's a pervert?" was my favorite chapter. Lol. Anywho, so when's the next chapter coming ut? i'm overexcited fr it ^~^

yay a new chapter!
hehehehehehe it was a fun one too.
poor sago, it seems like hikari only sees his perverted side doesn't she ^^
i loved the scene with the waffles, it made so much sence that mushra would be the only one not to know them, seeing as he was first a celestial guardian and then lived all alone his whole life, excluding the parts where he was with sago ^^
and the eating of ten waffles, i'm shocked kutal didn't eat him under the table though hahahahahaha but the thirteen didn't sound so surprising, we all know how much mushra can stuff away in that thin body of his ^^

great job on the chapter and i hope you'll continue soon again!

Yay you have upload one again !
thanx ! that was great :D

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cool took u to long another one another one make another chapter

hei..(ll')

i'm a huge shinzo fan too!!
hmm.. i am exacually really bad in english so it is hard to make a story :P
i live in the Netherlands and always when i talk about shinzo
they think i'm talking about chin-chan.. don't know if you know it, but it sucks..

xkuss

hay it's me mushra the enterran i got my own website never realy look at my email and how to use my email, my site is /mushratheenterran/ it is really only for talking to mushrambo/shinzo fans like yourself like to talk to you if you can

binka is 12 mushra 15 yakumo is 18 just to tell you

I absolutely love this story! D'ya know, Hikari reminds me of , well, me. A lot. Except that I have black hair while she has chestnut. And my eyes can be a goldyish color sometimes. ^^

I love the Shinzo facts! Please post more!

I think you'll make a great novelist. Your writing is very attention-stealing. And it makes me think you're older than you really are. Great job!

Please post the next chappie for "Who Want's to Play Truth or Dare?" soon!

Sayanora,

~Airiko-the-Angel13~