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| pcg 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. I'll admit it took me a while to get into this because of the style, but once it did it hit me like a runaway truck. This is fantastic. Oh my goodness, I love what you've done here. Just wow. |
| Schemergirl 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuse...Well. I see every superlative has already been used on this story: Brilliant. Amazing. Etc. That's because it deserved it. It evoked a wide range of emotions, and made me wonder, "What if..." Excellent setting, jumping through time like that, and somehow seemed most fitting to have the 'beginning' at the 'end'... circles indeed! This is going on my favourites. -Schemergirl |
| Mazzie May 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. For the last minute I've just been blinking. I'm totally blown away here. TheDonutMistress insisted I read this and I am damn glad she did. The ending is awesome. The humor is great and the way they go back and forth is really funny. My favorite, though, was the part about being necessary. This was all around fantastic. I'm faving. --Mazzie May |
| TheDonutMistress 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseOh my God. Wow. I'm amazed. Stunned. This is the best Naked Snake/Big BossxOcelot fic I've ever seen. The feel, the pace--I love the way you stretched it out over the years. It was fantastic. I think I went through the whole range of emotions reading this. It was funny, at points--Ocelot had some amusing thoughts and he and John both had great lines. It was bittersweet, on the whole. Parts made me smile and laugh, others made me nostalgic, others still made me sad. So very real. The ups and downs, the back and forth, the mix of emotions. The characterization is unbelievable. Your Ocelot is nothing short of perfect. Your Snake as well, for that matter. I can't tell you how much I loved this. Favorite, favorite, favorite. |
| Karaii 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThe best MGS fic I have ever -ever- read. I love the entire narration of the piece, and the way it flowed...and your Ocelot is just plain brilliance. You are an incredible writer...this is definately going into my favourite stories! Keep it up! Cheers, Karaii |