I really liked it.. It was very cute.. :D

w that was a cute! Haha I'll take this as a yaoi story LOL

so a cute story!

Nice job! No particular criticism, just that you should go through and comb for grammar and spelling errors.

lol! loved the last sentence. A new colour invented! It was short and sweet. Just the perfect way to start the day.

yo dude! obviously u know hu i am XD first things first, a miracle that your grammar is fine thoug i saw some small mistakes and also your spelling!! hahaha XD anyhu i'll just give you my ever-present reaction i show whenever u ask me what i think about your fics *smiles* bleh

Sweet and fluffy...dobe blue...aw :)

Wau! That was cool and fluffy. I loved the 'dobe blue' comment. It was so cute.

I think this was an awesome piece of shounen-ai fluff. I hope you write more fics. I like your writing style and I'd love to read more from you, especially SasuNaru^.^

Very cute! So sweet, Im all choked up! ^_^!

a beautiful one shot story. maybe needs a touch up or two. But it was beautifully written, the ending was nice/ smooth rolling.

~EnternalRX

Short and sweet. I really liked this.

That was so cute!! I also really like the color blue!

(smiles) I like it. Keep going!

Sweet, and beautifully written. :)

Aww... dobe blue :] That was cute. The ending was perfect. Good job.