Love your story but why did Keira have to die?

nice last chapter. i loved the ending. very niice. and im happy you ended it. no more stress on this story for you even though i did infact fall madly in love with it. HAHA! but good job.

whats going on? you havent updated in ages! why? everyones waiting for your chapters and its almost been a month since youve updated!! why dont you just end the story already this waiting is getting anoying!

nice chapter
keep up the good work and update soon

omg sadie! i loved this chapter. the flashback was so good and i visioned it perfectly. well i dont got ideas cause im suffereing from writters block as well and im missing my dose of wrestling. my mom isntletting me watch it! i missed two Raw's now =[ update when you can!

Poor James. Yet another great chapter, can't wait for the next update!! :D

im glad you took my advice explaining barbossas and clovers death. i think that did a lot of clearing up for everyone. im always glad to help ^^

well in my opinion, i think that its about time you ended the story cause seriously, you dont have anything else left to tell, i mean keira is dead, jack is bound to do something stupid to get himself killed out of his own grief that his wife and love of his life is dead, or be a sad drunk like he was before, james has a fiance,

the villains and bad people are mostly or completely eliminated
and it would be stupid to add anymore pointless villains or troubles at this point of the story.

end it. sadly, i think this story/ series has come to an end.

i think that you should end it with james wedding, maybe a couple of years have past since keira died, you can explain whats going on with everyone, how jack will end up, how hes doing (probably a drunk or something, i dont see him being himself again after keiras death)

and then james marriage to arabella. you can say he had a kid of his own or something.

oh and btw, what the heck happened to will and elizabeth?!

Ugh, so sad. I still can't imagine Barbossa as a parent, but you write it very well. Great work!

Chicaga

Love the story, very nice!! cant wait for more!

omfg, you killed keira! O_O shes dead?! omg, how could she die! i was practically crying when i read this, i feel so sorry for jack!! he really loved her!

Im sorry to say that i dont really like James much at all, i dont think he acts like his father i dont see the resemblance..anyway, i think that you should explain more the way that barbossa and clover died, like a bit more of thier story in here.

A couple of chapters dedicated to clover and barbossa, cause we dont know much about thier story, its a good idea to know about where they went off to, how arabella was born, and what led them to both die. this isnt a flame, i repeat this isnt a flame, its just helpful advice.

byebye

how come keira had to diiee? i loved her!! gr. lool. but it was a very good twist. but a very sad moment. i liked this chapter. for good. update soon!

what a sad chapter. Can't wait for the next update!! :D

SHE DIED. *sob* So sad. Great chapter though, the emotion was very good.

Chicaga

holy crap! i wanna know wat happens so bad. i cant believe wat catherine did. thats so funny. plase update soon. the suspence is killing me

Oh, who got hurt? Hopefully Nigel, but anyone else would make it interesting. Great chapter, can't wait for the next!

Chicaga