This story - as confusing as it is - is totally breathtaking and believable. I'd like it if you explained the whole deal to me, if it's not too much trouble; just to make sure I grasped the concept :)

i really enjoyed act 1 and i hope you continue onto act 2 soon, i liked your story so far, it did take me a little while and some things were a little confusing but i find if i do have a problem i can read it through twice and i get it all, i really liked your story and i hope you continue, thanks -T

wow real intense. but i'm confused still very deep.

At the beginning two words: NOT ENOUGH
At the end four words: I NEED MORE, PLEASE!

soo sad!...But I loved it!

again...amazing work my friend..amazing

@ll +h3 0+h3r p30p|3 wh0 d0n+ g3+ +h|s @r3 s+up!d WTF iz wr0ng wi+ j00 p30p|3?!

SO AWESOME! i liked it! no i lubeed it !

keep on writing'

Much lub,
~* Lady Cai

this was really really good but im confused about what exactly happend and what led up to it

Very well written, butt...i dont nuderstand lmao...sry, im kinna slow, so please explain...:P

wow...that's sadisticly adictive...i like...continue...

you need to continue it... it's really good!

I love it, Update soon please!

very well writen, But what happened?

This one was really good too! I'll probably read all your fics. But there is ONE thing that you need to clear up for me...How did Inu go from being all 'I don't want there to be an 'us'' or something, then to all demanding of her? It was kinda weird, but I still liked it...I guess I'M weird that way!! ^^; Keep on writing!