I love this story. The drama, the characterisation, all of it draws me in. I look forward to the next chapter ;D

Great chapter, as always :) I really love your style of writing.

-Katie

Well written,but I guess this is not R/Hr,rihgt?Hermione is going to end up with that "P." guy.As a R/Hr shipper,I found this disturbing.If I'm right,you should change the section.There is no "romance" between Ron and Hermione in this story,and there won't be,I guess.And a little reminder,Hermione is the last person who is cheating her loved one for years,even if she is not in love with him.She is not like that,your Hermione is OOC.Thanks for reading my rewiew,peace and respect...

Good fic... very well witten.

I read your bio... well about Snape... maybe he was with the 'light' side, but this don't make him a good person... he remains greasy, bitter and hateful... to be in the good side of a war not make you a saint.

I've always been a supporter of R/Hr... sorry but they are simply perfect for each other... but this Hermione of your fic. is so horrible that I just hope Ron can rid of her as soon as possible...

...and that she rots with her lover in the very depths of hell! he, he, he...

B.T.W. 'P' is for Professor, Prince, Percy?... well... I dont care... is not important.

Absolutely love it.

i love the story, never really liked R/Hr pairing. you write really well too

I hardly ever read other people's fics, mostly because they seem to be largely written by illiterates or all the characters act entirely out of character, but I saw yours recommended on the same page as one of mine, and it sounded... interesting. And I'm waffling, but I haven't had dinner yet so I'm a bit light-headed, but basically what I wanted to say was, this is fantastic. It's so so rare to read a fic obviously written by and for adults, and not just considering itself so because it has an ineptly-written sex scene in it. I can see from your Author's Note you are a woman after my own heart; the DH Epilogue made me want to poke out my own eyes with sticks in apology for making them read it. I can't wait to read more of this; it's dark without being whiny and intense without being angsty, and I'm intrigued by your version of Hermione, she's so unlike any other I've read. This is the only review I've ever written, the only one I've felt compelled to write, just to urge you to write more.

M.. yeah. This Hermione really is kind of a whiny ho compared to the actual one in the books. And good lord is her diary writing painfully overdramatic and longwinded.

okay...i know that this is for the chapter previous, but i wrote my review for ch. 4 and then i had a thought that came to my mind and i had to tell you it! P. stands for Professor...right? omg...im amazed at my own brilliance! and i found out that your 16...my age, and i was like 'whoa, this person is my age and they certainly know more about sex than most people i know'. so yeah, ill stop ranting now!

OMG! how dare you stop right there! ahh..im so agitated its not funny! love the story so far though...the blood-ink is a bit dramatic, and i cant see canon-hermione cheating...but i love it ayways! please update soon...im dying to find out who P. is, though i have an little suspision that i know who it is (a certain professors middle name?) anyways, love it and keep up the good work!

omg! i really need to know what happens. this story is so intreging!! keep up the good work, i love the cliffhangers. i hope this has a happy ending.

Good writing, and an interesting story. The whole point of fanfiction I think is to put your ideas (and perhaps fantasies) onto paper and mould characters into how you wished them to be perceived if not perceived as such in the novels themselves.

Noticing your profile comments I certainly agree with your comment about those who did not trust Severus Snape - I always had faith in him from the outset, even after he killed Dumbledore.

Nevertheless, I hope that this makes you understand why indeed I have the same view against those who clearly despise the idea of Ron/Hermione and endeavour to abuse this relationship.

I could see you becoming a dark author in the future: aim to write a believable relationship about characters entirely owned by you - with any luck it may get published.

Good Luck with your writing, and Herron forever =)

I'll be honest ; I find it impossible to believe you are only 16. Your grasp of the compexities of adult sexual relationships is astounding.

I adore this fic.

As usual, I loved it. =)

Oh my god hermione's cheating on ron !! does the p stand for percy ? well that was the only one tocome to mind unless you've added another character hehe :) anyway please let ron and hermione be together in the end :D and what will ron do ? oh my god loads too many questions lol anyways Great story please update soon can'twait to find out what happens :) x your a fantastic writer keep up the good workand don't forget to update soon :) x Love Mione-Girl.x