 Jessica01 2006-12-17 . chapter 1This is cute. When does Vlad come in? How old is Sara? |
 DP fan 2006-11-30 . chapter 1Aw! thats so cute! continue asap!:) ;) ;p :P |
 Phantom Shadow Pirate 2006-11-27 . chapter 1Cute! I loved it! |
 katiesparks 2006-11-27 . chapter 1Aw!Poor Danny!He feels so bad!I feel so sorry for him! |
 Rakahn 2006-11-27 . chapter 1I hope this story turns out as good as it sounds like it's going to be... I'll have to keep an eye on it. |
 Thouqhts-of-Nothinqness 2006-11-27 . chapter 1Very sad.
But I agree with Yami-chan and Unrealistic. If the reporter knows, shouldn't the police know. So at least they would know about Sara's father being abusive. Then he should go to jail for child abuse and Sara would live with a different family member or go to a foster home.
Other than that, excellent story. Nice plotline. So yeah, update when you can.
-Beyonce |
 Joelpuppy 2006-11-26 . chapter 1Aw thats soo sad. Cant wait till the next chappie comes out. Sounds like its gunna be a good story... |
 Yami-chan and Unrealistic 2006-11-26 . chapter 1Awe, a sadder story! I like it.
And I know you had to make the point...but if the reporter knows that the dad is abusive...then shouldn't the police know too? That's the kind of stuff that would land him in jail...
Very cute. I hope to see more.
-UR :-) |