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Reviews for: Phantom Child, Guardian Angel
Jessica01
2006-12-17 . chapter 1
This is cute. When does Vlad come in? How old is Sara?
DP fan
2006-11-30 . chapter 1
Aw! thats so cute! continue asap!:) ;) ;p :P
Phantom Shadow Pirate
2006-11-27 . chapter 1
Cute! I loved it!
katiesparks
2006-11-27 . chapter 1
Aw!Poor Danny!He feels so bad!I feel so sorry for him!
Rakahn
2006-11-27 . chapter 1
I hope this story turns out as good as it sounds like it's going to be... I'll have to keep an eye on it.
Thouqhts-of-Nothinqness
2006-11-27 . chapter 1
Very sad.

But I agree with Yami-chan and Unrealistic. If the reporter knows, shouldn't the police know. So at least they would know about Sara's father being abusive. Then he should go to jail for child abuse and Sara would live with a different family member or go to a foster home.

Other than that, excellent story. Nice plotline. So yeah, update when you can.

-Beyonce
Joelpuppy
2006-11-26 . chapter 1
Aw thats soo sad. Cant wait till the next chappie comes out. Sounds like its gunna be a good story...
Yami-chan and Unrealistic
2006-11-26 . chapter 1
Awe, a sadder story! I like it.

And I know you had to make the point...but if the reporter knows that the dad is abusive...then shouldn't the police know too? That's the kind of stuff that would land him in jail...

Very cute. I hope to see more.

-UR :-)
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