Great story!

A nice little ficlet :) Shep being forced to jump off the balcony then to take the drugs to kill himself must have been awful for him. Just imagine losing control over your own actions, scary stuff! Glad that the team managed to get rid of the mind control. I enjoyed this tale.

Great fic! Well done.

When's the next one? ;)

Excellent.

Oh, wow. That would be terrifying, to have your body doing things against your will, especially if it involved making you kill yourself. John would especially hate the loss of control. Nicely done.

good story...i am sure hopeing the you will write a squeal of something...it is really good

Wow! What an interesting tale! I really enjoyed this! Poor John he gets into trouble without even knowing it.

Very excellent. Poor shep. He can't even sneeze without someone wanting to shoot him for it.

An interesting tale. A simple, heartwrenching, and thoroughly suspenseful story. What's next?