 jdcocoagirl 2008-10-23 . chapter 1love the concept of the story and hope you'll find time to uupdate this story |
 Unheard Symphony 2003-12-11 . chapter 1Interesting...please do continue... |
 Jade 2003-02-19 . chapter 1 I liked it very much. I hope you continue this soon. Will be keeping an eye out for it. |
 Sulia Shincho 2002-09-06 . chapter 1 Get back to writing this girl! This is great I want to know more, more I say! Come on this is an excellent story and please don't leave people like me hanging forever, it sucks when the reader's left hanging forever. Please update soon! |
 Gin6 2001-07-20 . chapter 1please continue :) |
 Sgt Ranma 2001-06-24 . chapter 1I like the concept of the fic and the plot, but I assume that Ranma is a detective, not a patrolman, so why would he be driving around in a cop car? If he wasn't driving a marked car, how would that masked girl have been able to know? Seeing a car without the headlights on isn't really a reason to say its a cop car. |
 fallen 2001-06-23 . chapter 1 Sugoi!! ^^;; Sounds like a nifty beans AU fic.....O_O Looking forward to more. |
 Ling Mao 2001-06-23 . chapter 1Interesting start... Something about the title catches me... I dunno... I like how the story is going so far, but one thing bothers me though. If Ranma is a cop, I don't think he'd be going to his sister for information... But oh well this is the Ranma universe... He He He... Can't wait to see more. |
 Rei Tamashii 2001-06-22 . chapter 1 I love this fic! Please continue soon. |
 Super Kawaii 2001-06-22 . chapter 1 I think I've read this story on your web page. It's a great story, I hope you continue it soon! =) |
 may 2001-06-22 . chapter 1 This is a wonderful story! |
 Bunny Sailor Moon 2001-06-22 . chapter 1please write more :) |
 cnx 2001-06-21 . chapter 1 The concept really works. I don't know how well planned you have your chapters but so far its looking really promising. Since its an AU story it might be nice to explain some of the differences from the regular universe, but in context. By this I mean, is Ranma the same martial artist he is in the standard story? He seems older by a few years, but its not really clear. If you plan to expound on this in later chapters that'll be cool too ( you see to alude to that in your preview for the next chapter anyways). So I'll say good job and I lookforward to more!
"The angle of vengeance..." hmm.. well I hear that when she smiles she's acute. |