omg, *gasp*, very good, very sad. --Chris

Very powerful storytelling. Good job.

Darkness abounds! Wonderful feeling to the piece even though it is a deathfic. The bullets hitting him as he fires off his rounds. Leaving a message becoming out of the question. The final stand with the other...chilling. Well done!

Oh wow. Depressing. Dreary. But oddly enough, very satisfying. Sometimes you just wanna read a deathfic, you know? :)

Sniff.

Tears, dreaded tears. Why must you torture us so? Sniffle... sniffle... Okay, I think I'm composed now. More? :-)

Well that was short and to the point. To the point as in the point of an arrow? Straight through my heart?

Oh les mole! Very good. So John, he would go down fighting.

Wow...that was intense, and sad! Wonderful imagery!

Wow that was really emotional. I felt my stomach knot up as I read it. What rumors about the show?? Is there a website. Let me know. Thanks!

(sniff) That was said, but so well done.