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| RaiderTKD 2007-11-09 ch 1,  | abuseThat was a very cute story. ^^ I have to say, it's hard finding fanfics of unconvential pairings here, and even more so finding decent ones. Yours was very nice, and beautifully written. Good job! ^^ |
| Jaded-Raindrop 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuse^_^ That was cute. I dunno WHY, but I fell in love with this pairing by just randomly looking through the manga and saying, 'Omg, Yuki and Saki would make an awesome couple.' You probably don't care, but whatever... I really like this one-shot~ >>akemi-chan |
| AlwaysHiei 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was really nice; I liked it. I especially like the last line; "Just Keep Trying". Normally when a character says something that will probably mean so much more to the person it was said to than what it originally was meant to signify, I'd say, "If only so and so knew how much that probably meant to them in their current situation", but this being Hanajima, I'm forced to wonder if she did realize how important it could've been to Yuki? Anyhoo, really nice job. The fic was short and simple, but still managed to have a deeper meaning to it. ^_^ Great job. |
| Bashful Jane 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseOhh, very poetic. Articulate; I love it. |
| flwrgrl 2006-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a very beautiful, well written little story. I read it at furubarama but decided to review it here. I love the description of Yuki's pocket, it seems he WOULD have that sort of stuff in his pocket and Saki's reaction to the lolipop was cute. I think she would accept clumsy gifts given to her because she's not the type to hurt people's feelings. It was almost like a child giving an adult a dying dandelion. Loved the story. |
| cm1000 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWonderful one-shot. Your writing skills are superb and the pairing is great. |
| Runic Knight 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThis has such a beautiful melodic quality to it that really resonates throughout the entire piece. The entire story made me smile and left me with a great feeling! |