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Caellach Tiger Eye
2007-04-11
ch 1,
abuseVery good. I like the cops' reaction to Peter; I like how you showed that, for all he's an ambitious jerk, Nathan does have a heart after all; I like everything about this story. It really stunk when Peter was arrested for a crime he didn't commit, eh?

Good luck next time! Godspeed!
Professional scatterbrain
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseGreat fic, I loved how you wrote Nathan. He always seemed like such an interesting character - far more than the 'selfish older brother' that some writers portray him as. I really enjoyed this piece of work, and I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
GreenLeoFiend
2007-02-07
ch 1,
abuseLiked this? No, I loved it. Wow! You had me memorized. This was beautiful. You wrote Peter and Nathan very well. I as really hoping Nathan somehow sensed Peter's death. Great! And yeah, I was a little annoyed that Peter didn't put two and two together with Mr. Bennett as well. I was like, it's "The Man with the Horn-rimmed Glasses". I guess the "Spooky Euro Dude" would have to be present for Peter to put it together. And well, good thing he wasn't there, though, I think he was the one that caused the static during Fallout hmm.. Enough speculation. Great first Heroes fan fiction. Definitely going to check now if you have others.
umino-gaara
2006-12-02
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed reading this the first time I ran across it. I'm glad you decided to post it here also.
Dybdahl
2006-12-02
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazingly brilliant.
sarahofearth
2006-12-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is by far the best Nathan and Peter fic I've read. I love it- the "connection"thing they have between each other is excellent (and all this time I thought only Peter had that, ha, ha. Looks like Nathan's a little more spiritually inclined than he lets on ^.^!). I'm so curious about what's going to happen to Peter after he gets sent to prison. My sister keeps telling me that Peter's goign to be let out by Claire, but I'm hoping to God it's going to be Nathan. They're my two favorite characters but all my friends and siblings who watch the show say Nathan's an evil jerk. But I know better, producers don't plant charaters who are obviously evil in the show and make them evil, they make them saviors. Go Nathan! Anyways, great, great fic. You've done an awesome job and I really just want to beg you for another chapter so I can see more Nathan and Peter brotherly banter, but... You ended it. *sobs* WHY?!? Aw well, if you EVER feel a need to write a Heroes fic, try your hand at another chapter for this, eh? Eh? Again, awesome job, this is very well written. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Keep it up!

Have nice days,

~Sarah

^.^

Sorry for any typos; I'm in a bit of a rush, lol.
Queen Red Rum
2006-11-28
ch 1,
abuseDon't end it! I want you to write more. It is very compelling
anonymous
2006-11-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou're so good!
Thanks- Finally a Nathan I like! ccb
mari12345
2006-11-27
ch 1,
abuseThis was great! Please put up a sequal or something!
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