Whyd you have to go and flippin kill poor kairi and namine?!?!?!?!?!

*writhes* NO! WHY?! *sobbing* I hate angst, but I'm gonna read it any freakin' way!!

Your plot is amazing!
I'm really, really glad I can read your story!
Please update this soon!

Thanks and update!~

I like it. The story makes me feel sad when I read it please update soon.

Again, I really liked the chapter. *sigh* Poor Sora. He's drifting deeper & deeper into the darkness of his own heart. I feel for him. Anyway, you do a good job with that. Anyway, update when you can! Thanxs! :) :p ;)

ok, i have to admit i teared up at the funeral.

and still i love reading this, it almost seems like it could be a part of the series... though a grim twist that would be!

anyway, write more soon please.

Another sad chapter. Yep, the new Sora doesn't bother me at all. His attitude is perfect in my opinion. Maybe I just like dark stories...idk. Update soon!

First off, stories that contain song lyrics belonging to someone else and not you is not allowed at this site. I won't report you but you might want to get rid of the lyrics to be on the safe side.

I'm glad to see you updated your story. ^_^ I hope my e-mail didn't offend you because I wasn't attacking anyone.

Roxas' attempt at trying to cheer Sora up made me laugh but I found that cute of him hehe. I like Roxas in this story ^_^ he tries to keep his cool even under the circumstances he is in. If I was at a funeral like Sora, I wouldn't look in the casket because that is not how I would want to remember my love one; emotionless and lifeless. I didn't go to my grandma's funeral because I was barely starting college at the time and someone had to watch my little brother. My dad did though since I paid for his trip and... he looked inside. I know even today it bothers him but he shouldn't of looked in it (in my personal opinion anyway).

That memory of Sora x Kairi was SO sweet XD I didn't gag one bit since that couple is not my favorite. I guess when it's done right, it makes a GREAT difference.

Poor Roxas... and Sora too! WHY! XD Ok I'm done grieving.

:D They don't know how to land *giggles* oh man, sucks to be them. I like Sora's new vocabulary ^^.

Besides the mistakes I spotted in these lines here (I didn't post ALL the mistakes I saw just a couple):

Indeed, the piece or art would be considered sad and tragic, but also disturbingly beautiful in the aspect of how a community could be affected by one person.

He began to spoke in a soft voice

“They’re for you mission afterwards.”

He said as gave of a few tiny poses.

He whispered quietly the lifeless corpse.

“Do you get to say goodbye?”

“You want to honest to God truth?”

You did an excellent job. ^_^ You're getting better at writing. Nah, I'd rather not listen to the song XD it might make me cry lol.

Update soon ^_^

wow,
you are an extremely talented writer.

and actually, i see how Sora had matured and really i don't find the 'grown up' language too hard to adapt to reading.

can't wait for number three.

OC's...
yep, i'm the one with that dumb question.
i was browsing stories and stumbled upon this one... i love it. it was terribly sad that Kairi had to die though. :[

Wow... o_o this chapter actually made me cry. Roxas is one of my favorite characters to the KH series and just seeing him handle the fate of Namine was harsh. The way he took it reminded me of my father when he lost his mother; seeing your parent cry like that is really hard to face.

I like the dark elements this story holds. ^^ It pulls at your emotions but makes you curious to what will happen next. Since this chapter made me shed a tear for Roxas XD that means you're doing a good job as an author.

One thing I have noticed in your style of writing is your repetitive use of names. I'm not saying this is a horrible thing. What I mean by this is by you constantly using the name Sora or Roxas instead of finding other ways to refer to the characters ^^ the sentences you put down tend to feel repetitive.

You do have a few mistakes in here but it's not to a point where it disrupts the flow of your story. I understood this chapter well. Besides *shrugs* EVERYONE makes mistakes even real authors.

If no one likes the way you are portraying the mature and heart broken Sora, then they don't need to read your fanfic. Simple as that. I think you're doing fine so don't let any flamers discourage you.

:) Update when you can and I shall review!

You know, every time I read your KH stories it inspires me to write the ones I got planned already. I want to come over to the KH category but I refuse until I am done in the one I am stationed at. It’s a little rule I go by.

Besides the MANY mistakes I saw in this chapter ^^ I can tell this story is going to be dark, dramatic, but cool no doubt. This piece of art has potential and it’ll only get better as you expand it. Having a beta-reader look this over would help your writing immensely but that’s your own choice if you choose to get one. (I'm no english major so don't ask me XD because I might make your writing look worse. LOL)

This chapter was really good and made me giggle. I like the Sora x Kairi fluff as well as the Namine x Roxas one (them in the bed naked *giggles like a school girl*).

I don’t claim anyone to be OOC simply because this is AU and the characters aren’t teenagers anymore. So nobody can truly say how they would react unless you are the owner of the characters. It’s impossible to be EXACTLY in character when dealing with fan fiction but that doesn’t mean you can’t come close.

Now… moving on to the second chapter ^_^.

Great secong chapter & sorry for the late review. I've been really busy this past weeks. Anyways, I think you did a good job of changing Sora's personality. I mean, if you were in his place, you would probably change from happy to cold. I know I would. *sighs* I feel so sorry for him. But that's the beauty of fanfics. Great job & try to update soon! Thanxs! :) :p ;)

Another great, but sad chapter. Personally, I completely support Sora's need for revenge. His OOC attitude works for me too because I would expect something like this considering what happened. Glad Roxas is back too. Update soon!

... And then it stops... crap... IT'S GOOD! UPDATE SOON!