I don't understand how people can NOT consider fish meat. Excuses.

hmmm..

quite interesting so far...

but..

hmm.. somethings seems off.

my suggestion is...

you can end this story with kiss between them.

i think... the "kiss scene" will give more impact than only with words like "If it's any consolation, just remember, I'm a great kisser!"

then, i think if u prolong this story, it can make the mood much better. coz this story's pace is a little bit fast..

well.. it's up to u though.

i still like the story. hahaha..

see u!

lol!

how sad that their first date turned out to be like this...!

lol, great fics like always! keep up the great work!

YEHEY! THIS IS A REALLY GREAT ONE-SHOT! X3

you're REALLY good at doing this kind of stuff, poor athrun, he must have been devastated after all the mishaps. and isnt read wine hard to get off? kira's acting all weirdo again.. you love making him look stupid- eh, not that it doesnt suit him though :)

uhm.. this was really good but not really half as funny as talk dirty to me (which you wrote, right?). the ending was sort of out of note, dunno, the whole character of athrun was totally revoked with the great-kisser part. it was just hard to imagine if he was nervous, confident, malicious or what. anyways, it was nice. keep making us happy dude.

Oi Vey, Talk about opposites. I love this fic since it was very well done. Keep it up.

Nice finishing line!

aww, so cute! i love it! _ i love this last part: “If it’s any consolation, just remember, I’m a great kisser!” hehee... XD

So cute! Loved the whole thing..it was so sweet..and all those disasterous moments. lol...I loved the endidng too...u bet hes a good kisser! lol

haha, awesome one shot! loved the carnation partXD

XD indeed...a great consolation :D