Interesting. I hope you'd update it.

Good start. There's not a lot of stories about District X.

Hey great start so far, got me sucked in from the word 'Go'...or rather the words "Fill this out.".

Spelling and grammer is good too.

Where are you going with this? Is Ana going to meet X-characters or is this in a different universe? Either way I think would be great hey.

Keep it up. Don't let this idea go to waste.

Hmnn.. Where is this going...I'll need to find out.

This is very unique - I never really considered the fact that so many mutants are partrayed as having basically human physiologys. Keep it up