this is great - very well done. Its a shame you haven't written any Kori/Richard things lately... oh well.

LJ

hmm last story huh?
:D me love all ur stories and ur drama
hehe

i loved it
so much suspense...well to me anyway

omg have i missed your writing.
fantastic

you should consider another chapter?

Oh My God.
It actually FELT as if i was there, in richard grayson's body, of every moment of that story. Dear lord, that was amazing. Great fic, a lot of detail. Lol, to much in my oppinion. Well, at least in some parts. Ha ha, good fic. You should be proud.

Don't stop, they're fantastic!

that was really good! Loved the story!

you should make a squel to this story it was really good

Oh, this is some pretty story here...
WTF am I saying?! It's great. I just love it, the characters and everything... It's so real according to the modern girls and so said high-life...
I'm kinda getting into social problems, but I can't be helped...
Anyway, I just wanted you to know I love your story... Very good, indeed!

~Black

is this a oneshot or can you make a chapter?
i really like it. ^.^

Oh my God please write more its amazing.

OMFG. that was like so...interesting. i mean, i thought he would get kori in the end, but NO!

i loved the ending, what a different way of thinking! almost nobody ends stories like that and even if i would have liked it if they ended up together, the way you ended it seemed so...perfect.

nice job!

Nice one.Sad this might be your last one for awhile.I enjoy reading your fics so much!!Oh well.Write more soon!

Damn this is good.
The plot is so well crafted its insane.
I love how you ended it this way, and their personalities? Better than anything i've ever seen.
Seriously, you could publish a book.
Hey maybe you should.
But this is truly wonderful and the writing style is amazing. I wasn't bored with a single part of it.
Please don't ever stop writing. And even if you don't do a story (which i have learned does not go well with a busy schedule), i'll still look forward to your awesome one-shots.
Hope you'll write more soon!

X
~Crimson Black

*applauds* I ADORED this one-shot!

It was beautifully written, I loved the way you wrote it, it was realistic. And the subtle things you got him to notice. It was amazing!

You're still one of the best around BreenieWeenie! And the lemon...V well written...^^;

lol I can't wait for more from you!

Shine on you crazy diamond! Shine on!

X