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goldacharmed
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abusewow that was so magical i love it so much. the way you did the fireworks was so cool, and i really loved the way you made piper find out, haha it was a very enjoyable read, while being at the same time sad. great job, and keep writing. love it, later dude
eternallycharmed
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseI loved that! It was so cute how Piper found out. I hated how they cut her reaction out of the show. Great work!
Anime's-mistress
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseLove the story. It's just what I was looking for. C:
Sakurabound
2008-02-05
ch 1,
abuseOh my gah-that was amazing! I frickin loved it!

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blueeyesbetter
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseThis one's sweet too
agentrock
2007-05-11
ch 1,
abuseOnce again, I am in love with your story. I love season 6 of charmed, probably my favorite, but I just felt that they could have done so much more with it. For instance, the way that Piper found out about Chris, while funny, didn't really hit me in the heart like a moment like that should. You story, however, does just that. It's not everyday that the fanfiction is BETTER than the real deal. Kudos.
piperloveleoalways
2007-05-01
ch 1,
abuseOh another good story I just wished it could have happened like this in the show that would have been an episode to remember I loved it
HollyPhoenix
2007-03-17
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed this story. The part where Chris was calling Phoebe Anbe or whatever was a bit overdone, especially since it was only a two person conversation. The interaction between Piper and Chris at the end was genuinely touching. A also liked the interaction he had with Leo.
sabrina
2007-03-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseI just found your stories and I loved this! I swear I was in tears! Well done. I just love angst!
Trinilee Greenleaf
2007-01-22
ch 1,
abuseAs fantastic as it's partner. you really did an excellant job with these two fics. i loved them both, a lot. Well done.
crazyDFFgang
2007-01-08
ch 1,
abuseAw...That's amazing! I really really love this story. It's so great! I love how Piper reacted... It's just great! L O V E I T ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
(Chrissy.W.x, crazyDFFgang-member)
2. Acegik1017
2007-01-04
ch 1,
abusedude!! i like stories this!! where people just talk and one person doesn't know the other but the person just started to know who that other person was just by talking and stuff...I l♥v3 it all!! this is great!! :)
Stoneage Woman
2006-12-05
ch 1,
abuseI frankly preferred the other story, but it was still very well-written, and I loved the last line as well. Did you look up the defintion of 'freedom' in a dictionary?
adpi24
2006-12-04
ch 1,
abuseOMG you made me cry. I just loved this. I love how you actually made Piper smart (which she is) and put the peices together. What a great story! Amazing!
TriGemini
2006-11-29
ch 1,
abuseAWE...this was really good to read. Somehow the firework setting was perfect for Chris to tell Piper, that he was her son and that she was his mom. Definitely, enjoyed it.
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