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TheLadyPendragon
2009-10-24 . chapter 18
Yay, now that Jin has found that tribe, hopefully Touya's one step closer to being healed! Wonderful update.
Moon-princess-Usagi
2009-07-22 . chapter 17
NO! Touya-kun can't die! He can't! Please update soon! (please?)
Also, this story is super good, but here are some things that would make me, personally, love this story more than I already do:
1-Add some lemon dammit!(lemon=sex scenes BTW)
2-Have a happy ending! (or if you decide to have a sad/angst ending, make it cute and bittersweet. I love it when people do that!
Please tell me what you think!
-Yoko a.k.a. Moon-princess-Usagi
P.S-It is very hard to type with fake nails on!
TheLadyPendragon
2009-06-17 . chapter 17
This story is the best! JinxTouya is my favorite YYH pairing, and you capture them well. They are obviously in love, but they don't have to shout 'I love you!' every two minutes to prove it. I like the subtleness. It's sweet. Touya and Jin are both in character and I love them in that setting. I hope Touya gets well soon, and that they decide to remain in that grassland village. They seem to be more comfortable there -- at least they don't have to hide anything. Anyway, I hope to read more soon.
moonstarlover4u
2008-06-17 . chapter 15
Me: Why do you only have 12 reviews for this awesome story?
Sugar: Because people are too lazy to review?
Spice: Why are you guys so serious?
Me: *shrugs shoulders* dunno, just are. But this story is really good.
Sugar: We like the plot line with the Grasslanders. They seem so cool and i would have fun hanging with 'em.
Spice: The whole thing with Jin's mama made us sad though.
Me: Because it's sad when you loose the only family you have left.
Sugar: Overall, we love this story and wait eagerly for the next chapter.
Spice: Good luck on your novel, by the way.
Ryoukko-kai
2007-09-23 . chapter 10
Yay! Wow...that was REALLY unexpected. Our Jinny Boy? A half-breed? I love how you characterized Touya in this chapter. He's so true to who he is, instead of just...well, angsting over everything. I wish I was this good at writing... Yet another excellent chapter. Keep up the good work!
Ryoukko-kai
2007-07-27 . chapter 9
Yay! An update! Woot! The suspense for Jin’s story is killing me! I want to know! The short flashbacks are teasing me, dropping small hints to Touya and Jin’s personalities. I can’t wait for the next one!
Ryoukko-kai
2007-05-08 . chapter 8
Yay! Very good. Update soon!
Ryoukko-kai
2007-04-27 . chapter 7
Yay! Another chapter! I like Touya's dream sequence. Not only does it fit him but it was also funny. Honestly, though, I couldn't imagine him stopping a fight to pull up his pants, though that would be quite amusing. He always seemed...smarter than that. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!
Ryoukko-kai
2007-03-25 . chapter 6
Yay! Another chapter! I've finally gotton off my lazy ass to log in and review, since I know how annoying it can be to go without many reviews... *thinks of own story* Wind Song sounds like a really cool griffin, though for some reason I had this weird mental image of him laying on Jin's bed, shredding his pillow. My weird mind? Who knows! Anyway, good job and keep writing!
Ryoukko-kai
2007-03-15 . chapter 5
No! Don't leave! I'm too lazy to review much (I need to, though...), but I've been reading since the beginning! I check for updates about every three days or so, depending on free time and such. It's really good so far, and keep writing!
Sir Gawain of Camelot
2007-03-15 . chapter 5
^^ Jin's not gonna give up! Just isn't like him, giving up. xD I wonder how these prejudice Grasslanders will react to Jin's request. Hullo, I'm a male demon, and my male demon lover is dying of an unknown disease. Can you help us?

*huggles Jin and Touya* So cute... I'd love to read a prolouge to this story, how they met in more detail, how they started secretly meeting, how they fell in love, how they were found out. xD I'm just a hopeless romantic.


O_O Don't stop the story! Keep on updating!
Solvier-Mulighto
2007-02-09 . chapter 1
My, this is the most detailed story I've read in awhile!
I wish I had nice grammer like you! I can bearly even spell!
Ozuma and Blank's Lil' Kitten
2006-12-14 . chapter 2
Yes! An update! You have no idea how thrilled I was when I got the e-mail alert!
This chapter certainly didn't disappoint, you can be sure of that! That Wind Song sure is cute! Good job!
I must say though, I'm quite curious as to what the treasure is and what it is that guards it. (makes me think about Lord of the Rings for some reason)
Anyways, some parts confused me a bit. I mean I've heard of Suikoden, but those series of games never made it to Malta so I never played any of them. (a shame, I heard it's awesome)
But, it didn't confuse me to the point that I'd stop reading. This story is too good for me to stop! ^-^//
Oh, I hope this gets updated soon, I'm so giddy!
Speaking of updates, I hope to see a new chapter for your YYH/Resi Evil story! That one is awesome also, and I'm a huge Resident Evil fan, believe you me! (NEMESIS! - I hope good ole Nemmy (LOL) makes an appearance also. He's the reason I think Resident Evil 3 is so awesome yet so VERY scary. The music that plays when he appears still makes me quiver and makes my spine go all chilly! Very very few villains can do that to me! Go Nemesis!)
Sir Gawain of Camelot
2006-12-14 . chapter 2
I'm sure this would make more sense if I knew the other series this is based on, no? ^^

Still, I like it.

So, Jin's been sent for a treasure, hmm? *pokes* what kind of treasure, I wonder? And what's guarding it?
Sir Gawain of Camelot
2006-12-04 . chapter 1
'ullo! Don't know what you're crossing over with, but I love the fic. ^^

Incurable illness? Touya dies at the end, doesn't he? *pokes hopefully at the True Runes that might grant immortality* xD

The bits with Jin and Touya are just too cute! Well, I mean, all the bits have Jin and Touya, but the particularly Jin/Touya bits. Like how Jin keeps putting his hand on the small of Touya's back. ^^ He has a perfectly valid reason, but it's still cute.
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