 flower.kat 2009-12-15 . chapter 46lol love the story but lets get on with it!! |
 blackdawn117 2009-11-22 . chapter 46Hey, I don't know if I already sent you a review yet but this is a great chapter. Keep up the Good work! Also please continue on with the story. It's really good. Thanks. |
 Epidot 2009-08-21 . chapter 46I positively love this story. It is like a blend of Hellsing, the post-apocalyptic setting of Fallout and D&D (the angel and demon). I'm very glad that you kept your focus on Seras, even after you introduced Alucard. You also keep things fresh in the way you keep developing her vampiric powers. It is very addictive and the way you portray the 'Who-knows-what' in the story is very entertaining. It has kept me reading throug out the night and I was still not finished. It has been a blast reading it and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work.
Epidot. |
 YuriFan5 2009-08-17 . chapter 35Whoa, so now Alucard has, in addition to the army he already controls, a deamon dog, AND a deamon skeleton with a scyth bigger than Alucard. God he kicks so much **. |
 YuriFan5 2009-08-13 . chapter 31Thinking back to a previous chapter, how did Alucard get vehicle familiars? 'Cause it would make getting around a lot easier if Seras could get some of those. I realize Seras is nice and all, but she should just subjegate all of her victims like Alucard does. And another thing, how does Seras get blood drunk but Alucard doesn't? |
 YuriFan5 2009-08-13 . chapter 28OMFG Yes!! Now it's time to kick ** and...** the names, who needs 'em. |
 Six-string Samurai 2009-03-29 . chapter 46Good times. A very enjoyable chapter, especially in the beginning when Seras was enjoying a three way conversation with the devil and angel. Alucard had his fun as well. Nice. |
 Alehhandro 2009-03-22 . chapter 46my first impression?..: the wheels are turning and the different partys are starting to move again... this chapter i could name:
"the cart's gaining speed"
and anybody should beware of the consequences of hopping of it right now. as well as trying to find a place between the current passengers...
This chapter is cinda slow (which is not bad) and you intend in building up tension between the different combatants. you're as well flinging in some more questions like what is the plan of the angel and the succubus. or what will Mr. Ma do next?
My personal questions are what became of the weretiger-shaman-woman and of the two agents of Mr. Ma. do you plan on bringing them in once again??
all in all a very good chapter and i'll be willingly waiting some months again...
Take your time and dont get sick.
alehhandro... .;-] |
 VampyreVixen16 2009-03-17 . chapter 46Again i say the obvious
FINALLY anyway NO Seras cant have the angel or the demoness? that just sucks
Oh Seras is a patriot isn't she so this little plan here is going to royally ** her off huh >8D |
 Ridicully L 2009-03-17 . chapter 13I love every chapter of this to bits! Right now I'm only up to Ch 13 but I'm pretty sure this will be a cause of insomnia for a few days to come. Please update soon! |
 James Axelrad 2009-03-17 . chapter 46great chapter.
i see lots of interesting stuff getting started, from Anderson learning of things in England, to the new elements starting as detailed towards the end of the chap.
interesting stuff with heaven and hell investigating the issue.
hope to see more soon. |
 starspawn07 2009-03-17 . chapter 46just keeps getting better :D
46 chapters/297,053 words and you kept everyone in character,
and the reader hooked.
that is far beyond anything I've seen in fanfic net.
( even that story that got me into fanfic writing doesn't come close ! )
congrats !
I don't have any suggestions yet.
I'll try to think of something that you haven't already thought of XD
Take your time but do update ;) |
 Ludifer 2009-03-17 . chapter 46Cool, nice chap. Integra is starting to annoy me by having Seras in her old rubbish outfit...I way prefer her in her new clothes.
Looking forward to the next chap, good work so far.
(Alucard is Seras' 'servent' lol she wishes. :P) |
 Spirit HellFire 2009-03-16 . chapter 46"Isn't it oblivious?" |
 Lunatic Pandora1 2009-03-16 . chapter 46Well, this just can't end well. Seras needs to beat up more people though. Draw some proper power from all those souls of her and blow stuff up! |