wow nice job but ur rite it is still pretty emo

Finally a good story. All the storys ive read today are basically trash. Thanks for a good poem.

Squeal! It's so good! (a fangirl's dream) Love the writing style, it's really lovely. I'm not a member so sorry I can't add it to any C2...

Keep Writing! 8D

I thought it was good. I've added it to the Sakura Hevan c2, just so you know. And it's already been added to the SasuSaku shrine, that's how I found it. Keep up the good work.