 Ninnik Nishukan 2006-11-29 . chapter 1I love it. It's a slightly new take on the old Nabiki-is-the-sole-income-of-the-family theory (despite that whole old, overused whore-analogy). You managed to refresh it a little, so kudos to you. :) It was a very interesting read.
Mr. Tendo should get his off of his overemotional butt and start teaching again. It's not as if he's out of shape or anything. Bad father! Bad! Bad! #hits Soun with rolled-up newspaper#
Very, very nicely done inner monologue. I'd put this one in the darkfic drawer. |