 Garnet Sky 2009-09-26 . chapter 7Your series is excellent; Lancer is a wonderful addition to Team Phantom, albeit the unusual catchphrase. |
 Trinity Fenton-Phantom 2009-07-04 . chapter 7Great story. Still no Clockwork, Wulf, or Dani though. |
 CGNU Quarterman 2009-01-23 . chapter 7I just hope that the puppy in chapter 3 is okay |
 enderverse 2008-06-01 . chapter 6I think danny should get a kitten and turn it half ghost and then give it to vlad. especially if it works every time like in your story. |
 tanith-4486 2008-02-09 . chapter 7very good |
 MoonlightUmbreon 2008-01-28 . chapter 7-glances at clock- 2:37am?! Really, I've got to cut this out before the holidays finish. But, can't. stop. reading! Makes me wonder what my friends reactions would be if they knew what I stayed up all night doing. -visualizes mental institution, then shudders-
You had me addicted all night. Even though I find the vision of Lancer with ghost powers slightly... desturbing, it stil makes a great fic. Very enjoyable.
I'll be reading the third in Spirit Quintology probably before I even go to bed. Oh, and disintegrating books as torture? Classic.
Kris: Moonlight, I know you love to read, and I know your an insomniac, but this has to stop.
Moonlight: Why don't you try and live with insomnia then?! I might as well read and write... especially with things like this fic that are certainly worth staying up for.
Kris: -shakes head and sighs- She'll never change.
Peace,
MoonlightUmbreon |
 Adran06 2007-10-24 . chapter 2I'll be extra nice and give this story a SECOND review (for now at least, maybe more later). I am curious, how much did that jet cost? ;P I know you couldn't possibly have a cat, unless you stole Vlad's cat. Nope, it just isn't possible. ^_^ Keep up the great work!
TTYL,
Adran |
 Adran06 2007-10-24 . chapter 1I suppose it is kinda late to be mentioning this (especially considering I have read this story twice before (i think)), but I'm pretty sure they called the RV the "Fenton Family Ghost Assault Vehicle" or something, and not the Fenton RV. Just thought I should mention that, since you kinda said that it was the "Fenton RV" in this chapter. This review also served the purpose of upping your review count. And this story is definitely good enough to warrant more reviews. One of the better stories I've read (at least of the DP stories I've read). Anyway, keep up the great work!
TTYL,
Adran |
 egyptianqueen777 2007-01-30 . chapter 7another nice story! i'll read the other one later. keep up the good work! |
 Snickerer 2006-12-26 . chapter 7"Jazz was holding an impromptu therapy session with Valerie nearby, trying to get her over the shock and denial." *snrk* Yeah, sounds about right.
"Tsk tsk, William. Now you’re just giving me ideas." *cackles* Nice bit of plot addressing there.
"'even if I was cuffed to Klemper for three days.' Vlad shuddered at the memory." *cackles uncontrollably. Again.*
"You’ve got to admire the man. He got rid of that look of uncertainty almost instantly." XD Ohh, that is just a /lovely/ line right there.
"She also doubted that Valerie would want to face her father so soon after running off to New Mexico in the middle of the night." XD Yeah. Yeah, that might be a factor.
"Addiction? What addiction?" *snrk* Took the words right out of my mouth...*whistles innocently* |
 Aniu Blade 2006-12-23 . chapter 2The sequels as good as the first. I'm trying to read them all quickly to get caught up with the whole series. Wonderful work. |
 YumeTakato 2006-12-22 . chapter 7XD |
 Coronadofwb 2006-12-20 . chapter 7 I'm writing you two seperate reviews since they're both really long. That way you won't get too confused x3
Heh, therapy session XD That's totally Jazz xp Wow, Valerie is getting to see everything xDD Though if I was in her place I'd probably be losing my mind by now ;p Heheh, are there halfas everywhere or something? XD Maybe.. O.o *snort* Aw, poor Lancer ._. Torture like that is horrible D: Wah! I love the angst! =D Yay for Lancer being so strong willed against Vlad! :D That's got to be really inspiring ^_^ Fwah! Lancer's just so incredibly brave here! Just, Fwah! *squeals* xD I love it!! And I love the tone Lancer's using as he talks about what happened :D
"You’ve got to admire the man. He got rid of that look of uncertainty almost instantly." xDD LOL! Way to go Lancer!! You're totally speaking my language XD I'm so lame :3 “You’re a weak coward. You only started attacking people when you knew you could win. That’s what makes Danny different than you.” That quote is going into the Hall of Fame! XD "He isn’t used to taunting adults, is he? Doesn’t know what makes us tick." Oh yay!! I never really thought about, it was usually just Vald and Danny and other ghosts. Interesting... *rubs fingers over chin curiously* xD
Owwie! D: Even though Lancer heals faster now, that's still got to hurt being pounded by Vlad defenselessly >.< Yay! I love how Maddie came up with the solution to their "secret's revealed" problem. I really like how they're connected as one big team now, almost like a family :D Hehe, I like that xDD Danny says they have to go to school in an hour and Lancer says, I'd better get home xDD I dunno, that just founds funny. Btw, at my high school, school started at 7 ;p Heh, I can't decide if that was a really long night for them or a really short one XD It was probably really long one for poor old Lancer D: *pets him* Aw, I just love the ending for some reason xD Everything seems so peaceful and things are back to normal, kind of ;p Wondeful continuation to the sequel Kali! I shall get to the tempest very soon x3 *glomphuggles* Addiction! 8D
You're works cease to amaze me Kali and made me feel much better ^_^ *glomplehuggleluffyou* |
 Coronadofwb 2006-12-20 . chapter 6 xDD I love how Jack and Maddie lured Skulker out like that, and I like how you mentioned, "The adult Fentons were talking slightly monotonously, as if reciting a script." I gives you a good idea of what they're doing and what's going on xD "Plasmius’s henchmen are idiots" Rofl! XD Woot for the adult Fenton's for kicking ghost butt! =D Wahoo!
Hahahaha!! I love those book titles!! XD Erm, Vlad's New Mexican house doesn't sound so attractive with those rotting floorboards x3 Vlad too chicken to fight Danny? xDD I want to see Danny say that to Vlad in the show! That'd be priceless! XD Aww, that's so brave of Danny to say "If anyone was going to be mortally injured, he had announced, it was him" x3 Flah! I love how Vald's talking to Jack and Maddie! =D *heart beats rapidly* "His attacks, strangely to the humans, never seemed to hit Maddie, though a high percentage made contract with Jack." xDD I just love how you said it like that XD A high percentage ;p
psogjno'rengaur ggeragnj! Angst! 8D xDD I still love how Lancer says "Ghost World!" XD Heh, you can tell Vlad's getting desperate when he asks a question like, "...can’t we talk about this like rational beings?” xp Oh gosh!! Heheh!! I loved Danny's reactions to what was about to happen with Vlad xD Thy secrets are no more, boys! Heh xp Yeah, I liked Danny's plan there, "I’d better give them the history before he wakes up and gives 'his version'.” XD They forgot about Val's presence, teehee, how smart of them xp What Vlad told Jack there was actually really powerful and moving. I like it! :D Gah, I want to glomplehug Danny after that wonderful speech he gave Vlad xDD AHAHAHAHAHAHA! The ending is hilarious!! xDD Woot! Too priceless XD |
 Nicole Uzumaki 2006-12-20 . chapter 7Awe-some! Totally radical ending!! Can't wait for more!
~Nikky |
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